Ballad

Hi Olivier,
 
I enjoy listening to your songs...
 
Thanks for adding the lyrics, which I had to "google translate," so I got the idea. 
 
And thanks for sharing 
 
cheers
 
andy

Hello Olivier,
 
I just listened to "Soleil De Paris" and consider it to be a very nice and well made ballad.  All instruments are clear and distinct.  I was very impressed with the soundscape of the acoustic and electric guitars as well as the electric bass.  I like the way you left the electric guitar in the mix after the first solo.  By the way, you did not mention if that was you, or someone else, singing the vocal but it is a pleasent voice that sits well in the mix.
 
Some suggestions:
Snare drum brushes sounded nice but the tom hits and ride cymbal were not as pronounced.  I would pan the ride cymbal more to the right of center.  I would also boost higher frequencies on tom and ride cymbal.  Alternately, ask drummer to retrack tom hits and ride cymbal using stick instead of brush then mix the two sounds together.
There is very little lateral blending of the channels.  You have three lateral spaces: left, center and right.  At the same time, your use of effects is very effective as you build a very nice sounding soundscape.  You may want to consider using effects to help blend the lateral space into a whole by panning the the instrument and the effect opposite each other.  For instance if you have the acoustic guitar panned 30% left then pan either the guitar delay, reverb or both 30% right.

enjoyed it....and agree with prev suggestions.....though it's fine as is too of course.... ;-)

Olivier, this is a very fine ballad and a refreshing change of pace.  The panning suggestion is a good one, though I wasn't distracted in any way by the way it is now.  The main thing that caught my ear was the sizzle in the background which I finally figured was the brushes.  They lacked definition but were not unpleasant.  A tweak or two and this is a gem.

A nicely written song.  Very pleasant to the ear.  The piano part is lovely.  I also love the lead guitar work.  
 
Good work.

Ok,
Another try on this one.
Comments are welcome but I think I'm gonna take a rest with this one...Kind of hard work ..Too much time on the same song and one doesn't hear anything anymore...
Also Sonar crashes from time to time and all the work is gone because when I get caught in the process,it happens that I forget to save( actually close the project and then close Sonar,it is the safiest way I have found to face crashes😜) but no problems when everything goes away,it is a kind of a karma and when I go back to it,the outcomes are generally better than what I lost.
Thanks to all of you for the help and the capacity you have to make me dig deeper than I would have done by myself.
Cheers
Olivier

"Soleil De Paris" A great tune, mix translated well on my monitors.

This sounds pretty good just the way it is. I can't hear anything that stands out as a problem or is distracting in any way. Great job!
 
Love the piano and guitar contrasts.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Very good song.
 
I enjoyed it.

Hi Chad and Tim,
Thanks a lot for your comments.
I will tweak the mix a little bit but not too much .
Cheers Olivier