Shawn, I'm not hearing a balance or spread of all the different instrumentation and effects. Very loud on the music, guitar way up front and effects setting way in the background where you can hardly hear them. You need to focus and get all the elements into there right space (spread them out), get each track balanced and volume corrected and clear, then master for total clarity where all tracks are clearly heard in their respective place in the piece. Nice choices of instrumentation and effects so far. A good work in progress.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

All I hear now is the native indian(?) sample and drums on my cell phone until the end. That sample is too loud and wide overbearing the instruments, needs it's own space. Need to hear the energy.