Leizer
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No more monkey business
First own song lyric I have written since -93 or something, so be kind. I got the idea of this song on Koh Tarutao, Thailand two years ago where the monkeys were very bold to get a snack. The part that was needing this two years to getting done was the bridge. I've tried 4-5 ideas and this one was the least bad. How is the balance/choice of effects? Are the different parts (bridge) working together? Feel free to listen and comment! https://soundcloud.com/lasse-williamsson/no-more-monkey-business
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/15 20:12:02
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Heck yeah, the bridge works! :) Really great song, the effects aren't in your face, the only place I really notice them is in the vocal break at the end and it's not in your face, so yeah, they work really well. I really dig the bassline and how it plays around the melody and with the horns. This is a great tune and a great arrangement, thanks for this!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/16 00:43:10
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Hi Lasse, That was fun! You obviously have a penchant for arranging... Nice work I also listened to March of Mars... Is that your original arrangement? I enjoyed that one too cheers andy
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Leizer
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/16 03:19:52
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kevinwal Heck yeah, the bridge works! :) Really great song, the effects aren't in your face, the only place I really notice them is in the vocal break at the end and it's not in your face, so yeah, they work really well. I really dig the bassline and how it plays around the melody and with the horns. This is a great tune and a great arrangement, thanks for this!
Thank you for your thoughts, Kevin! Glad you liked the bassline! synkrotron Hi Lasse, That was fun! You obviously have a penchant for arranging... Nice work I also listened to March of Mars... Is that your original arrangement? I enjoyed that one too cheers andy
Thanks synkrotron, glad you liked it! Yes, March of Mars is my original arrangement. I wrote it back in -99 but wanted to record it with proper sounding orchestra sounds now, so a lot of duplicating of synth and live violins...
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/17 12:32:02
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Being a member of The Forum Monkeys I just had to listen. Very interesting song. I'd only say the keys may just be a tad too high in the mix. Love the chorus.
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/17 12:37:13
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No monkeying around on this one. Nice clean mix. I liked the nice airy feeling it has! Nice!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/17 12:37:31
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Oh yeah, kind of reminds me of Barry Manilow's Copacabna. And I mean that in a good way. Very Retro.
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Leizer
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/18 10:10:25
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bapu Being a member of The Forum Monkeys I just had to listen. Very interesting song. I'd only say the keys may just be a tad too high in the mix. Love the chorus.
Thanks Bapu for your forum Monkey entry! You got a point, the keys probably cover everything else a little too much. I wanted a fat synth key sound and the level got raised instead of... well compressed maybe? Really glad you digged the chorus! Starise No monkeying around on this one. Nice clean mix. I liked the nice airy feeling it has! Nice!
Thank you Starrise! I'm happy you liked it! bapu Oh yeah, kind of reminds me of Barry Manilow's Copacabna. And I mean that in a good way. Very Retro.
I take that as a compliment! I added a tape emulator on the master to get a more warmer, analog feeling. Maybe that helped too to get the retro style, other than the trumpet section.
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/18 14:59:08
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Thoroughly enjoyed this track, every bit !! Very nicely done !! Cheers, Kane
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Leizer
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/18 19:29:01
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audiomyth Thoroughly enjoyed this track, every bit !! Very nicely done !! Cheers, Kane
Thank you Kane, I'm glad you liked it!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/22 23:06:59
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excellent Leizer - really quirky and I love quirky.
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/22 23:12:14
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I just listened again - love it. Is that you playing the violin solo?
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Leizer
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/26 06:06:18
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daryl1968 excellent Leizer - really quirky and I love quirky.
Thanks for listening and glad you don't find it too mainstream. daryl1968 I just listened again - love it. Is that you playing the violin solo?
Thanks again Daryl! Appreciated! Yes, it's me playing the violin (& the bass, all the singing and the different synth parts). Violin is my main instrument so I try hard to get it in every song I can... ;)
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/26 06:17:18
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Leizer
daryl1968 excellent Leizer - really quirky and I love quirky.
Thanks for listening and glad you don't find it too mainstream.
daryl1968 I just listened again - love it. Is that you playing the violin solo?
Thanks again Daryl! Appreciated! Yes, it's me playing the violin (& the bass, all the singing and the different synth parts). Violin is my main instrument so I try hard to get it in every song I can... ;)
Excellent. I am still listening to the song daily.
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/26 14:39:39
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I like everything about this. My only comments are that the keyboard is a bit to up front and I think this tune could use an intro - starts a bit abruptly for me. Nice tune.
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Leizer
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/27 14:49:17
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MarkusClinus I like everything about this. My only comments are that the keyboard is a bit to up front and I think this tune could use an intro - starts a bit abruptly for me. Nice tune.
Yes you're probably right about the keyboard. Interesting, I love intros and this must be the first song ever I did without an intro. I thought it was unnecessary and kind of cool that the song start with the lyrics immediately. Thanks for your point, I maybe try to add an intro if I remix it later!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/10/29 22:59:28
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Leizer, This is a fun song with a bright & fun instramental track. I think the arrangement matches the spirit of the song rather well. I really like the bubbling synth part in the interstitium between the electric piano chords. My main crit is that the vocal needs to be a little louder during the verses. Cool stuff, Bert
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Leizer
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/02 03:11:38
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Thanks Bert for listening and commenting!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/04 16:26:58
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That was a trip... Bananas, absolutely bananas. Nice quirky pop song with a suitable arrangement and mix. I think I'll be hearing that bananas line in my head for a while.
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Leizer
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/05 04:15:07
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stevec That was a trip... Bananas, absolutely bananas. Nice quirky pop song with a suitable arrangement and mix. I think I'll be hearing that bananas line in my head for a while.
Yeah, you probably will go nuts after a while. ;) Thanks for listening and I'm glad you liked it!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/05 23:28:35
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Excellent and fun song Leizer......really enjoyed your violin playing (as well as the rest). Would love to hear more violin compositions....hint...hint.... Very nicely mixed too....bravo!!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/06 18:09:16
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/07 14:50:16
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nice song writing and big production! My only crit is the lower vocal harmony following lead vocal all the way, not sure that's really needed, sounds fine, just don't think it's needed. really fantastic work!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/08 15:25:18
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/10 03:27:49
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mikeinFL nice song writing and big production! My only crit is the lower vocal harmony following lead vocal all the way, not sure that's really needed, sounds fine, just don't think it's needed. really fantastic work!
Thanks Mike for your input! gruverider Fun Song! much enjoyed
Thanks, glad you liked it!
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/10 10:05:48
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/10 21:33:15
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Really cool fun song, total pro sounding arrangement and production.
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Re: No more monkey business
2015/11/13 06:01:09
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Thanks ohgrant, appreciated!
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