rose ... by the Galtieri Brothers

Here is the latest track from the Galtieri Brothers;
 
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=13238619&q=hi&newref=1
 
Listen and enjoy!
 
best wishes

Your mixing is getting better, from what I remember of the last couple I heard from you. I hear what Eko is saying, though I might not have put it the same way. If the instruments are real, why loop them? If they are VSTs, then they need more midi programming to get a real feel.
 
I a couple of spots, I can hear where the singer is trying to reach what may be just out of his comfort range. Either lower the key of the song, or try doubling the vocal.
 
Regards,
Dan

Not much to add to the music aspect - it does need more variation IMO - but perhaps a harmony vocal or two would work?  OK, and maybe some strings in the chorus.