My Latest Instrumental: Journey of Discovery

Here's an instrumental I wrote a while ago, but only just decided to try to mix properly. Electric and strummed acoustic were recorded, the rest are sequenced virtual instruments.
 
https://soundcloud.com/ant-832623685/journey-of-discovery
 
Update (mix 2):
 
https://soundcloud.com/ant-832623685/journey-of-discovery-mix-2/s-b1Es8
 
Thanks

The single thing that I think would make a difference would be to decide which instrument will carry the main melody and place it front and center. The piano is nice, but it seems more like a supporting instrument. I think the acoustic is the right one, but it is pushed too far back in the mix, IMO. The electric lead is just fine.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thanks for the supporting comments guys.
 
The original idea was to have the piano be the main instrument, but then to occasionally have another instrument lead to mix things up a little (during which the piano would provide backing support).
 
I think the cakewalk TruePiano spreads the notes within the stereo field, possibly making it sound like a backing instrument? I suppose I could try splitting it up into two tracks: one for where it is supposed to lead, and one where it is supposed to play a supporting role. I could then make the main lead track to be mono.
 
I hadn't thought of using the acoustic to be the main melodic lead. I'll give it a go to hear what it sounds like; thanks for the idea.

Very pleasant tune.  Could be a nice opener for a tv show! Like "The Office" or something . . .
 
I liked the second half a little more when the piano took a bit of a back seat. 
 
If this were my song I'd spend some more time editing the first minute or so, to make the strummed guitars tighter. You might slice and adjust an errant strum or two. Once the drums come in, everything locks pretty well.
 
nice one!
 
cheers,
-Tom

I've made a few tweaks to the mix:
 
https://soundcloud.com/ant-832623685/journey-of-discovery-mix-2/s-b1Es8
 
I ended up using Channel Tools to control the width of the piano in the mix. It's much narrower where it takes the lead, and spaced apart and quieter where it isn't.
 
I also made a few minor tweaks here and there as well.

Thanks
 
It wasn't consciously based on anything from Twins; it's been many years since I saw that movie, and I hardly remember anything from it. I did get inspiration from a one-off tune that was in a TV show though.

FWIW, I think the piano is sitting much better in the stereo field!
 
One thing I noticed this time that I hadn't before though is the open/closed hi-hat part that repeats a lot throughout the tune.  I would personally vary that a bit more so it's more of an accent rather than part of the base rhythm.