directionless electronic murk tune

my most recent effort

'fallen Snow' at the soundclick site in my signature

already I've gotten the not up to standards of previous work on this one

and i know it's murky in places, but I don't mind some murk, just too much

so what's left to say?

i really liked this one reminded me a lot of the boards of canada actually.

although I agree that its pretty murky. with a lot of anti phase issues that would probably help clean it up if you addressed them.

I remember you where using atmosphere from time to time, and i know from personal experience that although the individual patchs can sound awsome on there own they can take alittle work to get them to sit well in a composition

if you're interested you could try following some of shperis's links on the site (see link below).

i realised that you managed to get a very hot recording though the rms was
-8.8 db although the wave appeared not to be squared off . how did you manage to get it so hot?

per track compression? I,d be interested to see how you did it.

but over all, i once again very much enjoyed your work

EDIT: In fact I,d quite like to have a go a mixing it if you're interested. of course I can't offer much in the way of experience or talent but it could be an interesting experiment, and you'd be free to throw it in the bin afterwards (and retain all rights of course).

anyway let us know what you think and maybe we can arrange something.

heres a link to the last thing i did, plus all the links to spheris's advice are futher down the post if you want them.

hi jan

is the new version up yet? I,d be interested to hear it.

regarding me trying to do a mix, i really would approach it from a purely experimental view point I think you already have a really good idea of what you want from your arrangements, but it could be an intersting experience for me to work on some one elses composition, and perhaps for you to hear another take on your work.

you would be more than welcome to do the same with a track of mine if you felt like it.

i thinking you could send me the tracks as dry mp3s but we can discuss this via e-mail if you want to go ahead with the project.

look forward to hearing from you

kieran

bubblefish_ at hot mail dot com (needs the underscore)

hi jan had a listen to your latest version

liked the bass line you did but noticed you dropped the accordion sound which i acutally quite liked myself. kind of gave some puntuation to the high mid end

overall sound quality was about the same a bit muddy down low, but i think i prefered the original ending better myself though.

IMO whilst those chord changes can work well with more conventional music styles, they don,t always do so well for me in electronica, i almost find them too musical, if you get what i mean, and can distact from the hypnotic feel the genre often has.

that said I,ve never sold 1000's of records either so what do i know

still I like your stuff and look forward to our experiment.

(i sent you mail today)

all the best

kieran

for those with electronica interest

we of the P5 ilk
generally post our electronica on that forum, rather than here
i venture to teh songs forum to get to a wider set of production and other responses

but i include here a few links to other electronica from other active P5 forum members

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/10music.htm

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/usbmusic.htm

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/digitalauramusic.htm

:10: is trying to get us P5ers organized to put together a CD of dark/light compositions by the end of the month

we of the P5 ilk
generally post our electronica on that forum, rather than here
i venture to teh songs forum to get to a wider set of production and other responses

hi jan,

i had a look over there and have to say I'm a little envious, thats a real supportive bunch over there.

almost i shame i went with reason.

I,ll definatly check out some more of the tracks over there later on, and good luck with the cd ( keep us posted)