Soldier's Heaven

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eph221
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2016/02/25 21:28:32 (permalink)

Soldier's Heaven

One of my potential collaborators said I write *gloomy music*.  Is this gloomy? https://soundcloud.com/da...324214/soldiers-heaven
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    jamesg1213
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    Re: Soldier's Heaven 2016/02/26 07:15:47 (permalink)
    Yes Well, melancholy anyway. There's a nice idea here but I would suggest a) you need to think about developing it a bit more, and b) play the parts more fluidly, the piano is a bit shaky here and there. At the moment it's all like an intro to something bigger.

     
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    eph221
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    Re: Soldier's Heaven 2016/02/26 07:36:07 (permalink)
    Yes, I'm not a PIano playa.  But thanks for the feedback.
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    Re: Soldier's Heaven 2016/02/29 17:01:53 (permalink)
    So James, where should I go with this...symphonic type sonata or more like a song ABACA with lyrics?  It's a really pretty theme, I want to do some work on it.  Here's some lyrics I came up with right off the bat:  Enter battlefields forever/say you're gonna stay/disregard the people/but then people pass away.  Do you write lyrics?
     
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