Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band

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2016/05/16 15:58:31 (permalink)

Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band

Here is another new original song by the Scandalous Grace Band.  This one is written by Sean.  All levels of critique are welcome. We hope you enjoy.  
 
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Sean Peifer: Music and Lyrics, Lead Vocals, Acoustic and Electric Rhythm Guitars, Lead Guitar Solos.
Mike Hanson: Acoustic Guitar, Electric Rhythm Guitars, Bass Guitar, Lead Guitar Intro, BG Vocals.
Reece Bain (Beagle): Keyboards, Drum Programming, BG Vocals.

Verse:
I’m not what I once was
I know I’m different somehow
You captivated my thoughts
Transforming my heart even now....Oh

Chorus:
And I know I feel You inside
Convicting as You abide
Working so my heart will purify
And I know You’re deep inside
And I can feel Your heart in my head
And though I’m broken, I’m doing just fine
I’m less of a mess, I’m less of a mess
Than I was yesterday

Verse:
I’m not who I once was
Something inside me has died
It feels so far away now
Yet everything feels so alive.....Oh

Chorus:

Bridge:
I’m not quite where I want to be
But I confess
That I am less…of a mess

Chorus.

Outro:
I know I’m different somehow…

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    Rikkie
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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/16 18:10:12 (permalink)
    Hi Guys, nice one, I like the song and really love the guitar solo ; )  Maybe it's because english is my third language but I find it hard to understand the vocals, they sound buried in the mix. Guitar solo is so nice it should be a bit louder, imho ; )
     
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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/17 05:52:13 (permalink)
    English is my first language ( Okay.. It's my only language..:) But I agree with Rikkie. The vocals are a bit buried in the mix. Nice tune though. I really like the line 'I can feel your heart in my head'.. Good writing. Good recording. Thanks for sharing!

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/17 12:12:23 (permalink)
    First thing I thought was that the vocals are a little deep in the mix, then I read the two comments above and thought OK I am not going crazy, like the lead could come up a tad, thanks for sharing.

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/17 15:10:32 (permalink)
    Rik,  Thank you for listening and commenting.  I am discussing with the group, the vocals.  Sounds like we may need to tweak them.  
    Darin and Wookie- Thank you both for confirming what Rik is hearing.  

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/18 14:04:28 (permalink)
    I have updated the mix on this song and raised the Lead vocal level by 1 db.  I think it sounds much better.  

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/18 14:44:08 (permalink)
    Hi Michael, just listened to the new mix and I  can understand the vocals better although when the backing vocals come in I have a really hard time understanding the vocals but that could just be that my english isn't good enough ; )   What I do understand is the guitar solo, that first lick is absolutely lovely : )
     
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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/18 18:33:29 (permalink)
    Rikkie
    Hi Michael, just listened to the new mix and I  can understand the vocals better although when the backing vocals come in I have a really hard time understanding the vocals but that could just be that my english isn't good enough ; )   What I do understand is the guitar solo, that first lick is absolutely lovely : )
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    Thanks Rik, for the listen and for the nice compliment. :)
    I appreciate not only your listening, but also the constructive criticism to help us tweak the mix to optimize it. 
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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/18 18:36:00 (permalink)
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    English is my first language ( Okay.. It's my only language..:) But I agree with Rikkie. The vocals are a bit buried in the mix. Nice tune though. I really like the line 'I can feel your heart in my head'.. Good writing. Good recording. Thanks for sharing!



    Hey, thanks Darin, for listening and for the comments. I'm glad you like the song. Mike did a great job on the mix. 
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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/20 12:43:11 (permalink)
    Thanks Rik, Darin, and Wookiee!  
     
    We all appreciate very much each listen and comment you guys give!  it helps us to grow!
     
    As Mike said, he's adjusted the lead vocals and the guitar solo in the new mix (same link) - let us know if you have any further comments!

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/20 13:45:38 (permalink)
    Better, the lead vocal is now sitting just in front of the band, though when the backing/harmony kicks in I think you need to get better separation from them and the lead, it sounds here a little crowded around them.  The lead guitar is also sitting much better.
     

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/22 15:03:13 (permalink)
    Thanks Wook - Michael is out of town on a business trip now and further tweaks to the mix are probably on hold until he returns.  and he'll be gone for a while.
     
    we'll still take them down and make note of them for any changes necessary when he returns, tho!  feel free to continue commenting!
     
    thanks again so far everyone!

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/23 08:30:16 (permalink)
    cool song...I'd still bring the vox up...it still sounds much smaller than the guitars...
     
    I'd try to double the vox (re-doing the same part) then pull one left and the other right then bump one forward in the mix to give it a bigger sound stange...again now it sits in the middle of the mix and comes across weak (as compared to the rest of the music)....
     
    very cool tune and great performances...I really enjoyed it!
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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/24 15:11:28 (permalink)
    Good song with a nicely thick but still clear arrangement.  Sounds good!    Although, I do agree with the comments above that the lead vocals could use just a teeny bit more leveling so they float above the music throughout.  

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/25 23:16:56 (permalink)
    As a guy who struggles getting vocals placed right in the mix, this sounds good to me!  But go with what the others said, because I am reviewing it on my tablet and the stereo quality is, well, not great.  Just goes to show what good monitors can reveal, I guess. 

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/25 23:57:47 (permalink)
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    Better, the lead vocal is now sitting just in front of the band, though when the backing/harmony kicks in I think you need to get better separation from them and the lead, it sounds here a little crowded around them.  The lead guitar is also sitting much better.
     




    Hey Wookiee, thanks for listening and commenting.  Sounds like I have the Lead Vocal sitting much better in the mix, but that I need to work on the back ground vocals a little.  I am out in Las Vegas working on a trade show and won't get back until June 11th.  When I get back in the Studio, I will work on tweaking this a little.  

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/26 00:01:15 (permalink)
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    cool song...I'd still bring the vox up...it still sounds much smaller than the guitars...
     
    I'd try to double the vox (re-doing the same part) then pull one left and the other right then bump one forward in the mix to give it a bigger sound stange...again now it sits in the middle of the mix and comes across weak (as compared to the rest of the music)....
     
    very cool tune and great performances...I really enjoyed it!


    Pogue- Thank you for the listen.  I have never had good luck doubling the verses on a Lead Vocal, so I have got a few other things I may try.  Yes, I can raise it a little still, but I may be accomplish the same result with a few other tweaks.  I'll give it a go when I get back to the Studio.  If I am hearing you correctly, the rest of the mix sounds good, just a little thin or weak on the vocal. 

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    Re: Less Of a Mess- Scandalous Grace Band 2016/05/26 00:06:15 (permalink)
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    Good song with a nicely thick but still clear arrangement.  Sounds good!    Although, I do agree with the comments above that the lead vocals could use just a teeny bit more leveling so they float above the music throughout.  


    Steve, thanks for listening brother.  Love your comment, "thick, but still clear".  I have been really working on wider sounding mixes, while still retaining the clearity.  Sound like it is only the Lead Vocal that needs to be a little more prominent. All of you guys are kind of saying the same thing, but a little differently.  I feel like it is really close and just needs a little tweak yet.  
     
    Cwestmont- I appreciate you letting me know that it sound good to you, even if you are listening on a tablet.  It sounds good to me too, on a tablet.  I think its really close, but overall, sounding pretty good.  

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