SilkTone
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I have a huge number of unfinished songs all over my hard drive. Not sure why I find the last 10% to be so hard to do. But here is one I actually finished about 10 years ago: Image Disclaimers: I'm not a songwriter, singer, producer, sound, mixing or mastering engineer. I write non-music software during the day so don't expect anything good musically.
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emeraldsoul
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What, you don't work in marketing? :)
I liked your song structure. Organ used very tastefully, vocals coming in at slightly unusual times - not predictable - kind of got an early Pink Floyd vibe from the overall arrangement.
Very nice! I'd look at your cymbals, something is making them less pristine/clear and more flangey than I'd go for. The rest of your mix seems pretty solid, nice separation of elements.
And I can totally relate to having dozens of partially finished songs!
cheers,
-Tom
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SilkTone
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Thanks for taking a listen Tom!
I'll check what's up with the cymbals. I sent it through LANDR before uploading so maybe they added some "sizzle" or something that made the cymbals a bit flangey since I don't have a lot of processing on it.
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eph221
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The guitar lead that comes in is a little loud but otherwise I really like it. :D
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Well at least you were upfront about your efforts. Works here, very little to crit really, I do wonder if it might be a tad over compressed/limited. Thanks for sharing and share some more 
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I dunno, sounds pretty good here. It does seem to have a Pink Floyd-ish vibe as mentioned above that I think works well. I like it! The arrangement really suits the song and the vocals are nicely intelligible. Loved some of those chord changes too... I can also identify with the half (or less) finished songs thing - I've got more incomplete than complete! So if this is one of the rarer cases, I think you need to finish more of them. 
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dcumpian
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Nice one Steve! I would suggest panning the lead guitar out of the way of the vocals, and maybe adding a delay panned opposite side.
The rest of this mix is pretty good, everything sits pretty well.
I think the flangey cymbals are an artifact of Landr followed by Soundcloud compression.
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SilkTone
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Thanks for all the feedback, very encouraging! I'll try out some of the suggested changes and see how that works.
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