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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/05/28 13:23:53
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Hi Joe welcome to the songs forum, mix seems quite reasonable here, whilst I appreciate it is aimed more at the cinematic score, it could do with a little more ear candy as a standalone tune, that whistle off in the back could that come forward a tad?
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/05/29 13:56:01
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Hmm.. I guess it could use a little bit sugar on the top. I haven't done much cinematic stuff before so I have to admit I really don't know what I'm doing. The whistle thingy might be tad buried in the background, you are right about that. Thanks for the input. 
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/05/30 19:52:37
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Strong into. Wookiee speaks the truth (even though he's hard to understand without a translator  , I keed Wookiee and he knows it)
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/05/31 12:17:27
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bapu
Strong into.
Wookiee speaks the truth (even though he's hard to understand without a translator , I keed Wookiee and he knows it)
wowa ahc oaoorcrcwooaao cooscwoaoahscwoc aoacahwhrrc wwraahan aooo aorcrawhcanraaowo akrcooakworcanro rawhwa rooohu rrwoao cooscwoaoacahwhrr anahorwo aoacahc.
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/05/31 13:50:31
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Hi joe, sounds nice but as Wookie mentioned this could use a bit of melody on top.
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/06/01 14:38:45
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Ditto... the quality is there in both mix and arrangement, the tune just needs a bit more meat.
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JoeHans
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/06/05 06:46:04
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Thanks for the constructive critique and kind words. :) So more meat it is.
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/06/05 11:30:04
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Hi Joe, as a cinematic piece it stands fine as is imo -- I visualize scenes of a small group of warriors journeying cross country through green alpine uplands and snow-bound passes. If you want it to stand alone as an instrumental without visuals, then by all means add something.
Nice work in any case, and welcome to the forums!
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/06/05 11:47:51
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stevec
Ditto... the quality is there in both mix and arrangement, the tune just needs a bit more meat.
maybe he's a vegan like me. why do you people always ASSUME these things ! so chauvenistic!
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JoeHans
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Re: A little tune I just finished
2016/06/06 06:26:05
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Haha. I try to eat vegetarian food as much as possible so that might be the reason for the lack of meat. ;)
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