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2016/06/17 19:24:18 (permalink)

Gnat

Hi,  I'm writing a 4 part piece for high school band called *camp*.  This is the introduction called *gnat*  It's supposed to be sort of annoying , because as we all know camping is usually a bittersweet experience.  At least for me it is.  Is it annoying enough?

 
https://soundcloud.com/david-sprouse-76324214/gnat
 

This is a more complete version
 
https://soundcloud.com/da..sprouse-76324214/gnat-1
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    eph221
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/17 21:24:43 (permalink)
    I just listened to it with my third ear.  It's pretty annoying...
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/18 16:13:05 (permalink)
    The horns sound pretty awful...:D
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/19 18:18:41 (permalink)
    some cool ideas let down by the software I think. what is there is well mixed. reminds me of Lutoslawski in parts. you have a great imagination. actually this is very effective and impressive. you're right the brass esp is ****e, but really if played through VSO would be amazing

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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/19 19:09:43 (permalink)
    very kind mgh.  the triangles are vsl and you're right, they really shine compared to some of the brass samples.  The velocities are all wonky in the horns VSL is just so expensive.  
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/19 20:17:12 (permalink)
    I couldn't get access. Maybe you're currently working on it?
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/19 21:32:06 (permalink)
    LJ the second link works.  The first one is toast.  Thanks for listening btw.
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/19 21:54:44 (permalink)
    Hi again,  eph221
     
    I enjoyed that; I tend to get restless when I listen, but it didn't happen with this. It's evocative and, I find, cinematic. That is, it's easy to picture a scene in a suspenseful film with the tension upped by this music playing throughout. As for the gnat, I wondered if he (or she?) was on the ground instead of in the air in the middle there, as he/she seemed to be in imminent peril of being stomped!
     
    The motif you brought in after that section was very tasty and you developed that whole following section really well, I thought.
     
    Thank you for the lovely listen!
    LJ
     
    post edited by skinnybones lampshade - 2016/06/19 22:16:29
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/20 14:11:36 (permalink)
    Lj, thanks for the wonderful review.  
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/20 14:39:33 (permalink)
    It is kind of hard to get past those brass parts since there are lots of them, but the rest seems to work well - strings in particular sound good here.   I also get LJ's stomping reference in the middle - it does come across as giant feet coming down...  fortunately the gnat was able to remain elusive so can continue doing its thing in the third section.   

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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/20 15:55:09 (permalink)
    The stomping also kind of sounds like the garbage trucks picking up the garbage haha.
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/20 19:19:18 (permalink)
    Gnats like garbage.   Or so I'm told. 

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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/20 19:25:06 (permalink)
    So now I'm writing the second section called *bear*.
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    Re: Gnat 2016/06/21 02:29:12 (permalink)
    So I compressed the s*** out of the horns and added an ssl channel strip to them.  And I also added a jupter 8 bass line that sounds really cool.  This mix of *gnat* sounds really good at a louder volume.  Enjoy! (BTW those weird volume aberrations at the end happened in the exporting to the wave file OR in the encoding to MP3 , they weren't in the final mix).
     
    https://soundcloud.com/david-sprouse-76324214/gnat
    post edited by eph221 - 2016/06/21 03:22:56
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