So Go On. New original song by my band

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2016/07/10 22:20:19 (permalink)

So Go On. New original song by my band

It's been a while since I've post here, but here's a song by my band, called So Go On.
All crits welcome.
The vocals are by our singer, backing by the band and me on bass and production.
 
https://soundcloud.com/wal-pawlik/so-go-on
 
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    eph221
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/10 22:33:21 (permalink)
    Like your singer! The song's pleasant.
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/10 22:39:17 (permalink)
    Thanks eph. He does have his moments
     

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/11 17:21:15 (permalink)
    Hey, this is a very good demo of your song -- good vocals, good mix and some tasty guitar lines.  !!
     
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/11 19:37:18 (permalink)
    Good song.   Needs some fillers, i.e. Fiddle, steel guitar, etc...    What is there sounds really good.  Might bring up the drums a bit.  Might bring up the vocal harmony a bit too...
     
    My only crit of what you have at this point would be in the vocal diction.  In some places it sounds like the words don't flow in a easy country style.   Best way I could describe it is as perhaps someone who doesn't speak or sing in a southern accent normally....  The vocals themselves are very good, intonation is great, in tune and a very pleasant listen.  Not commenting on the singing....I think the singing is fantastic.  
     
    Anyway, really good song and what you have here is really a solid production.
     
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/11 21:10:47 (permalink)
    ABull, thanks for listening and kind words.

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/11 21:27:51 (permalink)
     
    markno999, thanks for listening and your comments. Yes, the drums. I have agonised over the drums, because they are just kick, a snare and hi-hat played with brushes mixed to simulate a shaker, because one wasn't available. It's a fine line between achieving that shaker sound and having the sound separate. Of course I could just use a real shaker and be done with it
     
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      My only crit of what you have at this point would be in the vocal diction.  In some places it sounds like the words don't flow in a easy country style.   Best way I could describe it is as perhaps someone who doesn't speak or sing in a southern accent normally....    
     



    Now this could be because we're a bunch of Aussies, that is Australians, trying to sound like you guys
     
     
      
    post edited by optimus - 2016/07/11 21:53:17

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/12 08:51:19 (permalink)
    Sounds very nice. You hide your aussiness well. Sounds like classic late 70's Pop/Country.
     
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/12 09:19:36 (permalink)
    Thanks Dan. I guess we are a bit old fashioned, but we have a loyal fan base of oldies, just like us.

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/12 14:45:12 (permalink)
    optimus
     
    markno999, thanks for listening and your comments. Yes, the drums. I have agonised over the drums, because they are just kick, a snare and hi-hat played with brushes mixed to simulate a shaker, because one wasn't available. It's a fine line between achieving that shaker sound and having the sound separate. Of course I could just use a real shaker and be done with it
     
    markno999
      My only crit of what you have at this point would be in the vocal diction.  In some places it sounds like the words don't flow in a easy country style.   Best way I could describe it is as perhaps someone who doesn't speak or sing in a southern accent normally....    
     



    Now this could be because we're a bunch of Aussies, that is Australians, trying to sound like you guys
     
     
      


    Optimus,
    I guess I was asleep at the wheel when listening and didn't notice you were based in Oz.   In that case, I think the diction is fine given that "southern" isn't your first language:)   Really fine song, had a listen again today.
     
    I would still consider pushing the drums a hair.
     
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/15 14:41:52 (permalink)
    Very nice...  Sounds pretty authentic to me, particularly for a group of old Aussies!  
     
    It was a very enjoyable listen, almost like the Eagles with a country singer.  Everything sounds balanced and all parts have their place.  The fills were very nicely done. 

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/15 21:52:41 (permalink)
    Very smooth and pleasing indeed.....I concur on the drums up a tad if possible...but likely most would not mind as is .... ;o)
     

     
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/16 01:46:38 (permalink)
    Stevec; Thank you for the kind words.
     
    Bassjoker: Thank you for listening. I'll be doing a remix and raising the drums a tab.
     
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/16 09:54:05 (permalink)
    You had me at "The vocals are by our singer."  :)
     
    Great tune I think, and the singer has the right twang. 
    drums up a little, yes I agree. The first thing that hits me is the unwanted flanging of that trebly acoustic guitar backing - I'd only guess that mp3 conversion did not serve you well. How did you mix this down? to 128 kbps?
     
    Would LOVE to hear your tune in higher resolution. I like country and you've got a good one here.
     
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/16 10:38:24 (permalink)
    Nicely done...love the production quality!


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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/16 20:47:48 (permalink)
    Very nice indeed. Great production/mix and performance.  I have no crit's to add to the suggestions above.  I have been told by some friends of mine that speak in other dialects of English (Brit's with all of their dialects, South Africans, etc.) that American accents are hard to do.  There are a lot of regional dialects in the USA and even in the South (Texas is different from Kentucky is different from southern Georgia, etc.).  So your singer not only did a good job in his performance but did a decent job of a "collective" southern accent!  Y'all did a right nice job!
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/17 01:31:44 (permalink)
    Tom; cclarry and Freddy J;  Thank you for listening and your kind words. 
     
    Tom;  Yes, I think the flanging is an artifact of the low resolution mp3, and Soundcloud's re-conversion, as its not present in the original wav file.
    I used the mp3 converter in Sonar for the conversion, but at a low resolution, probably 128kbps for faster upload. Normally, for my own use I convert at 256 or above depending on the use. In future I will try higher resolutions for upload to Soundcloud. 
     
    Freddy JL; I don't think that the singer is trying to particularly sound "American", but here in Australia there are many "country singers" that make a virtue of sounding "Australian". While I have no problem with this, this singer does use his natural voice with no affectation, and if it does sound "collective", which I personally find more attractive than our own, then thank you for the compliment.

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/17 23:58:26 (permalink)
    I believe this is pro quality. Everything is great here. Wow!

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/18 08:51:17 (permalink)
    Sounds good to me. Or should I say Oz-some! I was imagining another instrument, too, but I get carried away layering things on a lot.

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/18 12:44:08 (permalink)
    Not a country person myself but this is a very pleasant little ditty, mix sounds well here and you hide your Aussiness well.

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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/18 21:36:32 (permalink)
    very nice, gentle mix confidently recorded and performed. Great stuff
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    Re: So Go On. New original song by my band 2016/07/19 00:26:29 (permalink)
    kakku, steve,  wookiee, daryl. Thank you guys for listening and the kind words.
     
    Daryl, I've been a fan of yours since joining this forum. Praise from you is much regarded.
     
    cheers.

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