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2016/07/23 19:06:13 (permalink)

A short piano piece - Lunillion

Hi Everyone,

Here is a link to a short piano piece. As always I am grateful for your feedback and the time you take to listen.

Thanks
John

https://soundcloud.com/user-336417081/lunillion
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/07/23 19:11:10 (permalink)
sounds a little too quantized.  Did you perform it? ER quantized isn't quite it.  Maybe robotic or mechanical?  Are you a bot John?  It's ok if you are.  I spent years talking to a bot in a gay chat room.
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/07/23 19:59:28 (permalink)
I wrote it using Sonar and my A49. I am not a Bot. I am who I said I am. I just posted a composition like everyone else. I don't know what quantized means. I used Addictive Keys. I don't know what your chat room experience has to do with anything.
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/07/23 20:00:57 (permalink)
ok
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/07/24 10:15:27 (permalink)
I though that it sounded wonderful. Listening to this is a great way to relax on a Sunday morning.
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/07/24 11:32:38 (permalink)
You made Addictive Keys sound very good! I have AddKeys as well, I'm guessing you had another eq/compression or limiter/reverb in the chain? Would love to hear those details, I'm always struggling
 
Very nice playing throughout, especially towards the end, where it got dynamic in the softer passage.
 
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/07/25 08:07:48 (permalink)
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I though that it sounded wonderful. Listening to this is a great way to relax on a Sunday morning.


Thanks for taking the time to listen. I am really glad you liked it. It was meant to be mellow, like watching my dad cook Sunday morning breakfast. Thanks again.

John
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/07/25 08:53:17 (permalink) ☄ Helpfulby eph221 2016/07/25 09:46:16
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You made Addictive Keys sound very good! I have AddKeys as well, I'm guessing you had another eq/compression or limiter/reverb in the chain? Would love to hear those details, I'm always struggling
 
Very nice playing throughout, especially towards the end, where it got dynamic in the softer passage.
 
thanks,
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Hi Thanks for taking the time to listen to my song. I am really happy you liked it. I wrote it using Addictive Keys but I swapped the Addictive keys for a Bechstein 280 sample from EastWest Piano Gold, when I got the CloudComposer subscription, just to try it out (but not because I don't like the Addictive Keys). I liked the sound so I kept it. I use Addictive keys a lot. Sorry for the confusion.

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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/08/05 14:21:37 (permalink)
Some of the lines do sound a little quantized (perfect timing) and/or lacking velocity variation, but overall I really liked the piece and I also thought it sounded really good.   Solo piano isn't necessarily the simplest thing to pull off well but IMO you did.  

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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/08/06 08:04:28 (permalink)
Hi. Thanks for the feedback, it's really helpful. I'll take a look at changing the timing and velocities up a bit. I think I was a bit too focussed on making the timing perfect. Thanks again for taking the time to listen and for the encouragement. I am really happy that you liked it.

John
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/08/06 12:09:59 (permalink)
This sounds quite nice here.  Thanks for sharing.

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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/08/07 07:45:46 (permalink)
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This sounds quite nice here.  Thanks for sharing.


Thanks Wookie! I am glad you liked it.
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/08/07 08:06:58 (permalink)
Beautiful, really enjoyed that. Didn't sound over-quantized to me, very natural and expressive to my ears.

 
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/08/07 08:53:49 (permalink)
I'm with james on this one.  Very nice.  I especially liked the width in the field.  Spread out a bit, but not overdone.
 

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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/08/08 07:58:31 (permalink)
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Beautiful, really enjoyed that. Didn't sound over-quantized to me, very natural and expressive to my ears.


Thanks for the feedback James! I have no training in music or software, and it is really helpful to have feedback from experienced and knowledgeable people like you and the others on this forum. I am really happy that you liked it. Also thanks for taking the time to listen to it.

John
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Re: A short piano piece - Lunillion 2016/08/08 15:12:41 (permalink)
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I'm with james on this one.  Very nice.  I especially liked the width in the field.  Spread out a bit, but not overdone.
 


Thanks so much for listening. I am really glad that you liked my song. Sorry, I am a real beginner so please forgive my ignorance but I am not sure what you mean by "width in the field". Thanks again.

John
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