New Song (All My Love)

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Kerryoptimism
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2016/08/10 07:42:12 (permalink)

New Song (All My Love)

What do you guys think about it?
(Please, listen to it on your computer)
The effects that I used do not work when I listen on my phone.
 
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*All My Love*
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    Jesse Screed
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    Re: New Song (All My Love) 2016/08/10 13:34:15 (permalink)
    Hello Kerry, I like the song well enough. I listened to it on my computer speakers as you mentioned.  I like the beat, and the way you got the strings in there.  it reminds me of the kind of song I listened to on my late night R&B station.  I did hear the n word in there, which I guess is cool, I don't hear it much on this forum, so it caught me off guard, but for the style it fits.  I think you might be able to shorten it just a little bit, I felt that the lyrics seemed to repeat. I look forward to hearing more.  Did you use melodyne on the vocals?
     
    What are you using for effects and interface?
     
    Keep composing!
     
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    post edited by Jesse Screed - 2016/08/10 14:02:52
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    Kerryoptimism
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    Re: New Song (All My Love) 2016/08/10 14:34:44 (permalink)
    Sonar (Artist) is the software that I use. The effect I use is called the (Multi Chorus) effect.
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    Kerryoptimism
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    Re: New Song (All My Love) 2016/08/10 14:36:19 (permalink)
    By the way, thank you for the feedback.
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    Re: New Song (All My Love) 2016/08/10 15:12:43 (permalink)
    Nice job...    It's got a cool R&B vibe happening, and the vocals are well done.  A little dry for my tastes, but I think the chorus effect works.    I also like the sparse arrangement... even without bass it seems to work OK, though I do wonder what it would sound like with a simple deep synth bass line.
     

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    emeraldsoul
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    Re: New Song (All My Love) 2016/08/10 21:10:42 (permalink)
    Yeah I like it too. I agree, a real bass line would be a plus. I think on a couple of those high vocal notes you might be hair sharp, nothing too major. Could just be my ears.
     
    I like the lyrics, they get it all across.
     
    What about a little reverb after the chorus effect on your vocals?
     
    nice one!
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    Frugaard
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    Re: New Song (All My Love) 2016/08/11 06:56:44 (permalink)
    Agreed, it`s a nice song. I too miss a little bit of reverb. I like the way your vibrato goes at the end of your words.
     
    Keep making music!
    post edited by Frugaard - 2016/08/11 17:04:08
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    Kerryoptimism
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    Re: New Song (All My Love) 2016/08/11 15:28:34 (permalink)
    Thanks You All! You really made my day. I'll definitely consider everyone's advice on my next track. You guys ever want to talk music...let me know. 
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    Re: New Song (All My Love) 2016/08/12 07:44:37 (permalink)
    Kerryoptimism
    Thanks You All! You really made my day. I'll definitely consider everyone's advice on my next track. You guys ever want to talk music...let me know. 


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