"Giving all" - music and english lyrics

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humanrock
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2016/08/15 07:01:35 (permalink)

"Giving all" - music and english lyrics

Hi! Let me show you a song of mine called: Giving all.
I have written an english lyrics again.
 
Please consider:
1.: This is a demo.
2.: I'm not too much of a singer.
3.: english is not my native language.
 
https://soundcloud.com/user-621970950/givingall
post edited by humanrock - 2016/08/15 08:37:04
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    dcumpian
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    Re: "Giving all" - music and english lyrics 2016/08/15 08:40:12 (permalink)
    Nice song! Having the vocal come up an octave sometime during the song would be nice I think. I'd also suggest taking some reverb/room out of the kick. Now you need to add background vocals.
     
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    Dan

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    Re: "Giving all" - music and english lyrics 2016/08/15 10:41:56 (permalink)
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    Re: "Giving all" - music and english lyrics 2016/08/15 12:39:27 (permalink)
    good song with good lyrics.  Your voice reminds me of Lou Reed's but it'd be strange hearing him sing these lyrics! :D  I agree you need to give some variety to the vocal track.  I'm curious as well, when you say *this is a demo* what do you mean?  Because what I intuit is that you mean *this is a demo so it's not as polished*.  Those people that sift through demos have absolutely no imaginations.  Demo's have to be perfect these days. :D:D  Just sayin.
    post edited by eph221 - 2016/08/15 13:00:55
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    Re: "Giving all" - music and english lyrics 2016/08/15 17:07:25 (permalink)
    Dan and eph221,
     
    Thanks very much for listening and commenting.
     
    @Dan: yes the vocals "tested my nerves"... and its still not good... I'll find out something. And also I have to buy a good microphone... I hope soon.
     
    @eph221: yes by saying it is demo I meant it is not polished. Actually my equipment is limited so I don't think it will ever be polished to perfection . Actually I am not aiming to be discvered by a major music company. I record some ideas as a hobby, get some ideas from here from the comments and try to do them (whatever I can) and things like this.
    Actually you surprised me with the Lou Reed comparison... but maybe you are right...
    post edited by humanrock - 2016/08/15 17:44:55
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    Re: "Giving all" - music and english lyrics 2016/08/15 20:21:16 (permalink)
    humanrock
    Dan and eph221,
     
    Thanks very much for listening and commenting.
     
    @Dan: yes the vocals "tested my nerves"... and its still not good... I'll find out something. And also I have to buy a good microphone... I hope soon.
     
    @eph221: yes by saying it is demo I meant it is not polished. Actually my equipment is limited so I don't think it will ever be polished to perfection . Actually I am not aiming to be discvered by a major music company. I record some ideas as a hobby, get some ideas from here from the comments and try to do them (whatever I can) and things like this.
    Actually you surprised me with the Lou Reed comparison... but maybe you are right...


    I just read an article that says that streaming royalties are great for record companies and they're on the prowl.  Unfortunately, the flip side is that artists are making very little.  :D:D
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