Unknowen
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never mind
EDIT: all gone.... working on new version.. thanks for the help!
post edited by Dave000 - 2016/08/28 23:06:01
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Jesse Screed
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/23 18:00:23
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hello Sir, anything I say will be all a matter of taste. 1. I like the song, it is good. I really like the guitar part. 2. I like less reverb. 3. I like the vocals to be more out front. 4. I like the drums to be back just a bit. 5. I like a little bit more bump in the mids. 6. I like the song, it is good. Jesse Q. Screed
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Unknowen
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/23 21:59:12
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Thank you for the advise! I will use it. :) Just don't call me Sir anymore.. lol ;) ha!
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BASSJOKER
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/24 11:07:12
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Interesting.....indy/60s vibeishh .....cool. curious what vox effect ? Agree with Screeds points. It sounds like your in a bit hall or end of a tunnel a bit ...with my headcans on ....which is fine if thats the intention...could be a cool vid/movie backround. I actually have a song i will eventually share that has a very similar vibe...that eastern vibe....sorry rambling this am ;o).. I would also consider (and I am currently guilty with both my songs up right now of this...) ....maybe breaking up the "non-stop" guitar....I like it on the one hand...but maybe another version where it opens/breaks the song up ...though it would change its vibe a bit ..... Its deff cool though....thx for share....
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Unknowen
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/24 11:58:45
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Thanks for the input :) as far as Vox FX, I use everything on everything and mix as I go bouncing to a new track so things get lost along the way. I figure me being me will come out as art and moving that direction as I learn. 60s vib... Some say Iron Butterfly 60s, or Love and Rockets. I had never listened to those band in the past. I'm starting to get that I'm playing too much guitar, someone else told me that over the weekend. I think I just mixed it with generic 15" PA mains that where like 20 feet away. The mid-eastern sound…. Lol, yeah I don’t get why it sounds like that but for the way I play guitar. My right hand is kind of paralyzed, I duct tape a pick to my thumb to play so I developed into a hammer/string bender player… I’ll keep an eye out for your music… Peace!
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BASSJOKER
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/24 13:37:59
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Right on .....overall...very cool stuff in my book ....keep it up ;o)
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/24 14:00:27
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Mid-eastern influenced Iron Butterfly? Maybe... It is a pretty cool song, though I'd use the previous comments to help bring more clarity to the overall mix/arrangement.
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/24 15:28:13
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Good atmosphere ****in guitar lick Interesting vocal ideas: needs more dynamics, too much of the same thing at the same levels drop the guitar on a verse, just sing thru with only bass and drums needs some pad underneath it, real subtle but can glue things together
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Unknowen
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/24 16:10:08
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jamesyoyo Good atmosphere ****in guitar lick Interesting vocal ideas: needs more dynamics, too much of the same thing at the same levels drop the guitar on a verse, just sing thru with only bass and drums needs some pad underneath it, real subtle but can glue things together
Thanks! I just saw this... I hope you like my comments to you as well :) Peace!
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Unknowen
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Re: 1st try at full production of a song.
2016/08/24 17:54:48
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I was in a rush on last post. Just want to thank all who checked out my song and commented. Advise well heard… peace!
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