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2016/08/23 17:23:19 (permalink)

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EDIT: all gone.... working on new version.. thanks for the help!
post edited by Dave000 - 2016/08/28 23:06:01

Hay look,
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    Jesse Screed
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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/23 18:00:23 (permalink)
    hello Sir, anything I say will be all a matter of taste.
     
    1.  I like the song, it is good. I really like the guitar part.
    2.  I like less reverb.
    3. I like the vocals to be more out front.
    4. I like the drums to be back just a bit.
    5. I like a little bit more bump in the mids.
    6.  I like the song, it is good.
     
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    Unknowen
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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/23 21:59:12 (permalink)
    Thank you for the advise! I will use it. :)
    Just don't call me Sir anymore.. lol ;) ha!

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    BASSJOKER
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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/24 11:07:12 (permalink)
    Interesting.....indy/60s vibeishh .....cool.    curious what vox effect ?
    Agree with Screeds points.  It sounds like your in a bit hall or end of a tunnel a bit ...with my headcans on ....which is fine if thats the intention...could be a cool vid/movie backround.   I actually have a song i will eventually share that has a very similar vibe...that eastern vibe....sorry rambling this am ;o)..
      I would also consider (and I am currently guilty with both my songs up right now of this...) ....maybe breaking up the "non-stop" guitar....I like it on the one hand...but maybe another version where it opens/breaks the song up ...though it would change its vibe a bit ..... Its deff cool though....thx for share....

     
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    Unknowen
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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/24 11:58:45 (permalink)
    Thanks for the input :) as far as Vox FX, I use everything on everything and mix as I go bouncing to a new track so things get lost along the way.
    I figure me being me will come out as art and moving that direction as I learn.
    60s vib... Some say Iron Butterfly 60s, or Love and Rockets. I had never listened to those band in the past.
    I'm starting to get that I'm playing too much guitar, someone else told me that over the weekend.
    I think I just mixed it with generic 15" PA mains that where like 20 feet away.
    The mid-eastern sound…. Lol, yeah I don’t get why it sounds like that but for the way I play guitar.
    My right hand is kind of paralyzed, I duct tape a pick to my thumb to play so I developed into a hammer/string bender player…
     
    I’ll keep an eye out for your music…
     
    Peace!

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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/24 13:37:59 (permalink)
    Right on .....overall...very cool stuff in my book ....keep it up  ;o)
     

     
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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/24 14:00:27 (permalink)
    Mid-eastern influenced Iron Butterfly?   Maybe...  
     
    It is a pretty cool song, though I'd use the previous comments to help bring more clarity to the overall mix/arrangement.
     

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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/24 15:28:13 (permalink)
    Good atmosphere
    ****in guitar lick
    Interesting vocal
     
    ideas:
    needs more dynamics, too much of the same thing at the same levels
    drop the guitar on a verse, just sing thru with only bass and drums
    needs some pad underneath it, real subtle but can glue things together
     
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    Unknowen
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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/24 16:10:08 (permalink)
    jamesyoyo
    Good atmosphere
    ****in guitar lick
    Interesting vocal
     
    ideas:
    needs more dynamics, too much of the same thing at the same levels
    drop the guitar on a verse, just sing thru with only bass and drums
    needs some pad underneath it, real subtle but can glue things together
     


    Thanks! I just saw this... I hope you like my comments to you as well :)
    Peace!

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    Unknowen
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    Re: 1st try at full production of a song. 2016/08/24 17:54:48 (permalink)
    I was in a rush on last post. Just want to thank all who checked out my song and commented. Advise well heard…
     
    peace!

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