Accidental Ball of Dust

Excellent song, performance, recording.
Love the vocal - it totally rings true
Nice pictures too. Nature is pretty phenomenal.

Yes your main vocal seems to have a ton of authenticity to it. In the beginning of the tune it's mixed in much lower than the guitars, so maybe boost the voc a little there? Really, whenever it's a whispering vocal, it's pretty quiet relative to the acoustics.
 
I liked the lyrics, too! Great delivery as well.
 
The bass has got an issue somewhere, it's not super bad as it is, but maybe something is  mashing or clipping? Did you use a limiter on the bass guitar? If so, how does it look?
 
The thing that really is getting me is your voice - I think you might sound like somebody kinda but I can't place it. Roger Waters maybe? No matter, nice voice.
 
cool job.
 
cheers,
-Tom

Jeff, the  two major impressions I got on the first go around are your voice and lyrics.  They totally sell me on this song.  You have a huge dynamic range in this mix, as Tom stated, and I'm on the fence with this.  I believe you can still have the dynamics without sacrificing the clarity of the vocal.  Other than that, this is stellar songwriting.

Cool song!  It's got a bit of late 60's sort of vibe, with nice chord changes, arrangement and "earthy" lyrics.  
 
About the only nit I have is +1 to the above: the whispered vocals do get lost in the music and should ride a bit higher to better carry those lyrics.
 

Love the vocals!!