New but old song, Be A Man mix 2017

Originally written in 1992, I rerecorded the song in 2017.  This is really my freshman attempt at "singing."  I use the word singing loosely.  I wish I could remember who I was so angry with that it caused me to write the song.  The timing is not standard 4/4, but it still fits into a meter signature with quarter notes counting as 1 beat.  Anyway, the song is about fake people, which fits perfectly into the current American culture - that says keep it real, 100%, but when you do the culture says it is savage.  People say they want authenticity, but when faced with it, they cannot handle it.  Sorry, my viewpoint on the American culture is not for here.  How does the mix sound?  Suggestions?  Burn the music?  Delete it?  Make sure no one has to ever suffer through the horrible sounds? 
https://soundcloud.com/user-509713656/be-a-man-2017