First Love

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Jean-Philippe ROGER
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2017/05/24 06:09:34 (permalink)

First Love

Here is our latest title: First love
Music : Jean-Philippe ROGER (Bass, guitars, keyboards, programmation drums)
Lyrics : Paul DEMPSEY
Voices : Aurore Petit
https://soundcloud.com/je...roger/first-love-final
 
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    dcumpian
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    Re: First Love 2017/05/24 12:44:36 (permalink)
    Overall, this mix works fairly well. There are two things I would change:
    1. The bass is too loud and I am not sure about the tone. It tends to overwhelm the drums rather than support them.
    2. The vocal could come up a bit.
    Reminds me of The Daou...
     
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    Jean-Philippe ROGER
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    Re: First Love 2017/05/24 13:01:00 (permalink)
    Thank you Dan for your comments.
     
    I didn't know The Daou
     
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    Re: First Love 2017/05/24 17:43:21 (permalink)
    Sounds reasonable here thought the Bass is a little to present and the vocals float in and out, thanks for sharing. 

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    Jean-Philippe ROGER
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    Re: First Love 2017/05/24 17:50:45 (permalink)
    Thank you Wookiee four your opinion.
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    Re: First Love 2017/05/24 20:06:16 (permalink)
    very cool tune...great vibe...I'd pull that vox up a bit more in the mix..I think the verb/efx is good and fits the tune well..... but it makes it sound too back in the mix.
     
    but I really like the feel...

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    Jean-Philippe ROGER
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    Re: First Love 2017/05/24 20:40:54 (permalink)
    Thank you Tom for your comment.
    It is always interesting to have the opinion of other musicians, it makes us progress
     
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    Re: First Love 2017/05/24 22:27:07 (permalink)
    This is one of the few songs I've heard that make me wish it was longer.  I like the effects on the lead vocal, though, I think the lead vox could come up a few db's.  I await your encore.

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    Re: First Love 2017/05/24 23:43:12 (permalink)
    Very nice song indeed!!  I agree with the above comments though, the lead vocal might be increased a wee bit.  Nice one!
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