The Drop Out Congretation -The Code

Author
Post
Essentials Only Full Version
Stevethesearcher2020
Max Output Level: -90 dBFS
  • Total Posts : 31
  • Joined: 2015/02/04 17:24:44
  • Status: offline
2017/06/23 21:32:48 (permalink)

The Drop Out Congretation -The Code

My new song "The Code" which I have been told sounds a bit like Depeche Mode.
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RiNQeip7QK8
 
Please like and comment on Youtube if you like the song.
 
I need the views and the comments.
 
Thanks
 
Steve
#1

5 Replies Related Threads
    eph221
    Max Output Level: -28.5 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 4665
    • Joined: 2014/12/22 05:06:50
    • Status: offline
    Re: The Drop Out Congretation -The Code 2017/06/23 22:39:30 (permalink)
    liked this, concurred with the comp to DM.  You might want to mix up the rhythm and rhyme of the lyrics so that it's not always  predictable.  DM is really good with that, they'll surprise you with an off rhyme at just the right moment,.  Almost like a conversation.

    *Q-TIPS ARE FUZZY!!*
     Is a lumineer a new dental appliance?  
     
    i7 2.5 ghz
    32GB RAM
    WINDOWS 10
    My Ass
    Cubase 9.5
     
    #2
    bjornpdx
    Max Output Level: -75 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 759
    • Joined: 2010/12/10 11:41:29
    • Location: Portland, Oregon
    • Status: offline
    Re: The Drop Out Congretation -The Code 2017/06/23 23:17:01 (permalink)
    Steve
    I liked the synths on the backing tracks and I really liked the video.
    The main track got a bit repetitive IMO but maybe that's the nature of the genre.
    About halfway through I wanted to hear some changes in the lyrics and melody.  



    Bjorn
    soundcloud.com/orygun
    www.bjornfredrickson.com
    https://store.cdbaby.com/Artist/BjornFredrickson
     
    Purrfect Audio Pro Studio, RME UCX
    Cakewalk by Bandlab,  Studio One,  Reaper
    #3
    Stevethesearcher2020
    Max Output Level: -90 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 31
    • Joined: 2015/02/04 17:24:44
    • Status: offline
    Re: The Drop Out Congretation -The Code 2017/06/24 01:06:01 (permalink)
    Thanks for listening. Yes vocals could be better. I appreciate the feedback. I would probably remix this in future but this took ages to do. Totally solo effort. Everything by me but I would have preferred a guitarist
    #4
    Stevethesearcher2020
    Max Output Level: -90 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 31
    • Joined: 2015/02/04 17:24:44
    • Status: offline
    Re: The Drop Out Congretation -The Code 2017/06/24 01:09:41 (permalink)
    bjornpdx
    Steve
    I liked the synths on the backing tracks and I really liked the video.
    The main track got a bit repetitive IMO but maybe that's the nature of the genre.
    About halfway through I wanted to hear some changes in the lyrics and melody.  




    Thanks for your feedback and for listening. Yes a bit more variation in later verses and choruses would have been better. I am definitely considering that in the future.
    #5
    Stevethesearcher2020
    Max Output Level: -90 dBFS
    • Total Posts : 31
    • Joined: 2015/02/04 17:24:44
    • Status: offline
    Re: The Drop Out Congretation -The Code 2017/06/24 01:14:10 (permalink)
    eph221
    liked this, concurred with the comp to DM.  You might want to mix up the rhythm and rhyme of the lyrics so that it's not always  predictable.  DM is really good with that, they'll surprise you with an off rhyme at just the right moment,.  Almost like a conversation.


    It does need more modern rhythm and a something extra but once again thanks for listening
    #6
    Jump to:
    © 2025 APG vNext Commercial Version 5.1