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2017/06/27 13:14:00 (permalink)

Contemplating-Updated

Hi all,
 
I would like to get some feedback on this song before I do the final recordings.
I intend to re-record everything but I just want to make sure the song works first, so shoot on everything.
 
* Added some some samples to the intro and vocal harmonies
 
New mix, I think this is ready now, any thoughts?
https://soundcloud.com/mikael-kauppinen/contemplating/s-w2Jie
post edited by Ida_Mikke - 2017/07/26 21:08:04
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    Re: Contemplating 2017/06/28 04:36:49 (permalink)
    I really liked it.  You gave good variety to your central motif throughout the piece.  Likewise its a very memorable phrase.  Only thing I might suggest is cutting off some bars at the beginning and get to the vocals quicker.

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    Re: Contemplating 2017/06/28 05:49:42 (permalink)
    Thanks for listening :)
    I am aware of the long intro, I'll see what I come up with instead.

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    Re: Contemplating 2017/07/01 11:34:12 (permalink)
    Added some some samples to the intro and vocal harmonies in the chorus
     
    post edited by Ida_Mikke - 2017/07/26 21:09:46

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    Re: Contemplating 2017/07/07 19:54:23 (permalink)
    I liked it...     It's got some attitude, crunch, and an overall cool vibe.  A little prog-metal-ish NIN perhaps.
     
    The only mix nits I would point out are that the vocals get a bit lost sometimes, the drums could stand more presence to drive things, and the main guitar riffs are somewhat centered and could use a little L/R spread.  Nits on a good song. 
     

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    Re: Contemplating 2017/07/09 08:11:18 (permalink)
    Thanks for listening Steve.

    Cool that you liked the song.

    I will re-record most of the gutars, it's a little untight in some parts and I have a little twist that I want to implement still. But that's the last detail that isn't in these demos.

    Then I will fatten up the guitars and mix it properly. I will post the the final recordings when I'm done for some last mixing tips.

    Thanks again!

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    Re: Contemplating 2017/07/26 20:25:08 (permalink)
    New mix, I think this is ready now, any thoughts?
    https://soundcloud.com/mikael-kauppinen/contemplating/s-w2Jie
    post edited by Ida_Mikke - 2017/07/26 21:08:27

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    Re: Contemplating 2017/07/26 21:07:24 (permalink)
    That's weird, the link works if you copy paste but the if you click the link it tries to go to the old link...
    Ahh found how to fix it, now the links work
     

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    Re: Contemplating 2017/07/26 21:18:41 (permalink)
    Since it's not a final recording/mix I'll not comment on any of the mixing issues (as I see them).
     
    The song seems like it's worth re-recording IMO.
     
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    Re: Contemplating 2017/07/29 13:29:57 (permalink)
    Thanks for the listen. Started the re-recording, and came up with a a new part alsp, hopefully I will manage to mix it properly 🤘

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    post edited by Ida_Mikke - 2017/07/29 14:32:44

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