First Single - Bring You There

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Jeanmanu
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2017/08/28 10:06:17 (permalink)

First Single - Bring You There

Hi there,
I wanted to get some feedbacks from you guys on my first Pop/Rock single.
Hope you'll like it, otherwize give me your comments ;)

https://soundcloud.com/johnmct/bring-you-there

John
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    dcumpian
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    Re: First Single - Bring You There 2017/08/28 12:56:01 (permalink)
    The opening vocals could be tightened up just a little, and the harmony on the right is a tad too loud, IMO. But once the song gets going, it gets pretty good. I enjoyed the listen...
     
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    Re: First Single - Bring You There 2017/08/28 16:38:44 (permalink)
    I like the song a lot.  I'm listening on very cheap computer speakers so keep that in mind, but it seemed to me that the vocal got a little buried starting around 1:13.  
     

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    Re: First Single - Bring You There 2017/08/28 16:43:02 (permalink)
    Really like the song.  The voice does need to come forward a little at the point jude mentions.

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    Jeanmanu
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    Re: First Single - Bring You There 2017/08/29 07:40:26 (permalink)
    Thank you very much for these first instructive comments.
    Will try to make that better next time.
     
    Hope to have more feedbacks soon ;)

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    Re: First Single - Bring You There 2017/08/29 09:04:34 (permalink)
    I am listening to this on my built in monitor speakers as my studio is in pieces at the moment. I quite liked the song on the whole and it has a good groove. I agree with the other observations that have been made in that the vocal seems to get buried, maybe its the tad too much compression on the drums that buries them.

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    Re: First Single - Bring You There 2017/09/01 07:52:56 (permalink)
    Thank you Biodiode for your views.
    I'll forward that to my sound engineer.
     
    If you have any other comments, don't hesitate ;)
    John
     

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