Tu Me Manques

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2018/03/20 22:46:20 (permalink)

Tu Me Manques

Could be translated:"I miss you".
Thanks for listening.
All the best.
Olivier.
https://soundcloud.com/ol...ougeot-2/tu-me-manques
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    eph221
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/03/20 22:58:42 (permalink)
    Didn't understand the words but I think I heard the word *voyeur* in there.  Thanks for writing a song for me, was fun.  Joissance!

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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/03/20 23:19:18 (permalink)
    Hi David,
    Thank you for listening,
    You are right,the song has been written for you in some way,because songs ( for me) are written for thoose who hear them...
    Cheers.
    Olivier.
    post edited by Vilovilo - 2018/03/26 20:45:29
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/03/31 19:54:23 (permalink)
    Hello,
    I will try to give you a translation of this song which has some meaning in my personnal path..

    I Miss You

    They tell me just remain patient
    They say it's just a matter of time
    But all theese sayings won't make the trick
    I miss you

    Groping around with no faith
    Surrounded by dark and deep haze
    Don't even know what I am waiting for
    I miss you

    They say that there will come a day
    When someone will arrive on my way
    But you know this can't be true
    I miss you
    The lonely thought which comes to me
    Is to carve all over my skin
    The first letters of your name
    I miss you

    They tell me just remain patient
    They say it's just a matter of time
    But all theese sayings won't make the trick
    I miss you.

    Thanks to you if you give an ear.
    Cheers.
    Olivier.
    post edited by Vilovilo - 2018/03/31 21:38:34
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/01 00:41:15 (permalink)
    carving letters over one's skin is a little extreme olivier.  i'd seek help for that (unless it's a french idiom of some kind).  Nevertheless I can tell you really love this person (if bordering on obsession) :D:D

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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/01 13:46:06 (permalink)
    The mix seems to be OK here, everything in the right place.

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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/01 17:18:38 (permalink)
    eph221
    carving letters over one's skin is a little extreme olivier.  i'd seek help for that (unless it's a french idiom of some kind).  Nevertheless I can tell you really love this person (if bordering on obsession) :D:D

    Hi David,thanks for your insight ,maybe " engrave over my skin" should be closer to what I mean.
    You are right in what you say.
    Cheers.
    Olivier.
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/01 17:22:56 (permalink)
    Wookiee
    The mix seems to be OK here, everything in the right place.

    Thank you for listening John,
    I take your comment as a compliment,because I never feel at ease with mixing.
    Cheers.
    Olivier.
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/02 01:07:50 (permalink)
    Very nice sound, Olivier!  I really like the blend of the acoustic guitar and the piano.  There were some occasional timing and tuning issues between those 2 instruments, and I think the piano could have used a bit more reverb and use of the sustain pedal.  Felt a little choppy at times.  I thought the drums were excellent, and you did a nice job mixing your voice, with just the right amount of reverb.

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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/02 20:53:59 (permalink)
    mrpippy2
    Very nice sound, Olivier!  I really like the blend of the acoustic guitar and the piano.  There were some occasional timing and tuning issues between those 2 instruments, and I think the piano could have used a bit more reverb and use of the sustain pedal.  Felt a little choppy at times.  I thought the drums were excellent, and you did a nice job mixing your voice, with just the right amount of reverb.

    Hi Sir,
    Thank you for this ..wise comment.
    Yes the title is somewhat " jerky" ....the thing is that the piano is not a real one and I have problems with this kind of stuff.
    I played it on a midi keyboard,using true piano( lots of things going wrong :midi translation is not good,plus virtual piano is not able to " tell" things with accuracy,plus I am not able to play properly..) put it out in " real life " going out from the converter through a cheap preamp then back in the PC but ..it is NOT a piano.
    I did not quantized it because it doesn't work so edited it here and there in the secret hope that it would make the trick,but it does not..... Hi hi.
    The title is a kind of a model.
    You heard it,so I am sure you are a musician.
    Anyway,Thanks for listening.
    Cheers.
    Olivier
    post edited by Vilovilo - 2018/04/02 21:31:46
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/03 14:50:22 (permalink)
    Cool tune! I'd just lower the piano a little when the vocal is present, and maybe a little more reverb on the piano.
     
    Don't care about a translation - I think the cadence fits very nicely and you have a nice voice!
     
    I think your acoustic guitar's tuning is not exactly matching the piano, hope you can check on that. It's a nice part of the song.
     
    cheers,
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/03 19:35:50 (permalink)
    emeraldsoul
    Cool tune! I'd just lower the piano a little when the vocal is present, and maybe a little more reverb on the piano.
     
    Don't care about a translation - I think the cadence fits very nicely and you have a nice voice!
     
    I think your acoustic guitar's tuning is not exactly matching the piano, hope you can check on that. It's a nice part of the song.
     
    cheers,
    -Tom

    Hello Tom,
    Thanks a lot for listening,
    Ok people have good ears here :-)
    Yes guitar is tuned with a cool tool named Peterson's Strobosoft which gives what they label " sweetener" ,a way to put some strings slightly off tune,which normally works ,but not against the " icy " tuning of a " fake" piano....
    I will have a look to remake the guitar part,but I do not know when.
    Thanks again.
    Cheers.
    Olivier.
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/03 23:20:41 (permalink)
    Nice understated arrangement and clear production. Love your deep vocals.
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    Re: Tu Me Manques 2018/04/04 21:54:55 (permalink)
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    Nice understated arrangement and clear production. Love your deep vocals.

    Hello Paul,thanks a lot for listening.
    Sometime musicians say when I sing tunes with my guitar that the arrangement is inside the way I play the song, I don't know why,maybe it is the way I hear it.
    Cheers.
    Olivier.
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