First attempt

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2005/02/16 19:46:57 (permalink)

First attempt

Just my first attempt at doing anything with Home Studio, as well as my first attempt at posting. If this works, I'd welcome some comments.http://www.joyrideband.org/images/Open_Arms_Demo.mp3
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    Fester Lewis
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    RE: First attempt 2005/02/16 22:02:26 (permalink)
    It sounds a bit "synthy".

    A hell of a lot better than my first project though.

    Brian
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    upandadam
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    RE: First attempt 2005/02/17 00:37:40 (permalink)
    LOL....Well, it's a lot synthy considering the instrumentation is just about all midi with the exception of one out of tune guitar. What I was focusing on was decent vocals. Don't know if I achieved it but I'd welcome any comments on how to improve.
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    borgnine
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    RE: First attempt 2005/02/17 00:55:29 (permalink)
    u got a great voice.

    this is a good 1st go.

    i would pull back on the effects. the beginning sounds real good (pre- reverb?)
    i would keep it natural. don't "cover-up" them vox!

    the mix levels are also good imo.
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    upandadam
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    RE: First attempt 2005/02/17 01:10:20 (permalink)
    Thanks, but my wife is the one with the great voice. I just push the buttons. Thanks for the input.
    post edited by upandadam - 2005/02/17 01:24:43
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    pilfa
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    RE: First attempt 2005/02/17 05:56:16 (permalink)
    Vocals do seem a bit distant with that amount or reverb?!! but nice tune. Not convinved about the drum sound sound a little to drum machine. But like i say nice track and your wifes got a nice voice
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    RE: First attempt 2005/02/18 16:07:29 (permalink)
    I like the tune but the vocals do seem to be not meshing with the mix. Fantastic rich voice though. Wow.
    post edited by Nogerot - 2005/02/18 16:16:40
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