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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/12 00:10:00
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Steve
Beautiful song. You have all the elements in there to bring out the emotions. Kind of a Bob Dylan vocal treatment which works nicely. I thought there were a couple of minor timing issues, but could just be me.
I like the dreamy style of the song.
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montezuma
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/12 12:00:47
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Get some girls together and have them sing "ooohhhhhs" and "ahhhhhs" and maybe some simple call and response to your lyrics. That's what I hear anyway. Reminds me of some of Bob Dylan's recent albums.
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/12 13:40:32
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Channeling Van Morrison before he's even dead? Isn't that kind of like cheating death?  Actually, you should send it to him. Sounds like his kind of song. The guitar solo is good but a little mellow. I would have went full Jeff Beck on it, but I'm selfish that way!
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SupaReels Music
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/12 14:25:55
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Bob Dylan ! Van Morrison ! and then Jeff Beck ? ... thing is, IF I could play like you Wayfarer I'd have a go, it would probably sound great BUT ... I can't, so v e r y frustrating .... And how do I get it to Van Morrison's ears!? Thanks you lot, always like the good and bad comments so I might re-do this and get someone else to play guitar Know anyone? LOL  Steve
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/12 17:30:03
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Nice heartfelt song, I have no suggestions as they have been given, thanks for sharing.
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/12 17:45:42
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/12 21:31:40
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I'm always happy to help anyone, but you seem to be a very capable guitarist to me. What you have sounds good. I probably would have gotten silly with it. I do silly exceedingly well. 
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/12 23:39:17
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aka the master/slave dialectic. Hegel is always relevant. :D:D
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/13 09:50:08
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eph221 ... Your MUCH too clever for this place .... really, (BTW I don't agree with the reduction of reality over synthetic unity ... sooner feel the wind and rain on my face and use expletives to help people understand me LOL)
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/21 19:33:12
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Nice song... A lot to like. The mix as per usual sounds good, clear but full.
My only nit is what Bjorn referred to - it feels like maybe the tempo should be just a bit faster because the "live" performances seem to be pushing ahead of the beat, while the groove is really laid back.
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Re: Recipe of the world
2018/06/24 18:06:58
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Thanks guys didn't hear that timing issue but having listened to it for the 'ump tenth time ... now I CAN hear it ! Oh blast looks like a redo is on the horizon ... why are you lot so clever?? Thanks, I'll be boring you soon with my new mix
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