Take My Heart Away - EDM pop

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2018/09/30 20:06:40 (permalink)

Take My Heart Away - EDM pop

Hi All
 
Here is a new song that I came up.  Please me know what you think.
 
Thanks
 
https://soundcloud.com/th...ost/take-my-heart-away

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    emeraldsoul
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    Re: Take My Heart Away - EDM pop 2018/09/30 20:35:40 (permalink)
    Not too shabby! I like the bounce. In the non-vocal spots you might bring the percussion (and hand claps) up a bit in the mix.
     
    The vocals are cool and trippy but can't always make out the lyrics. Any chance you could augment it with some regular, non-autotuned vocals? You could call-and-response them, mix it back and forth? Just a thought.
     
    After 1:42. in this section you have something like an electronic cowbell or blip on the "four" - you could make more of that in the mix. Just another thought . . .
     
    It won't be to everyone's taste with the vocal effects but I liked it. Nice job.
     
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    Re: Take My Heart Away - EDM pop 2018/10/01 01:25:08 (permalink)
    Not my kind of music, but from my limited perspective, it seemed really good for that genre.
     
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    Re: Take My Heart Away - EDM pop 2018/10/01 22:57:49 (permalink)
    very big
     
    very thick
     
    nice vocals
     
    dance off yourself
     
    this makes me happy
     
    who are you?
     
    make your way to me
     
    ok
     
    glow unto thyself biscuit
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    Re: Take My Heart Away - EDM pop 2018/10/03 00:43:42 (permalink)
    Hi All
     
    Thanks for your comments.  
     
     

    http://www.soundclick.com/vicentechung
    https://soundcloud.com/thefoundandthelost

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