Pearl the Surfer Girl (CHANGES made thanks to ideas from Wayfarer, Emeraldsoul & Wookiee)

That's the best tune I've ever heard from you Fred. Very cool!
 
I think the vocal could come up some and have some treble added to it. The bass and vocal were stepping on each other frequency wise. One or both could use some EQ'ing in my opinion. At least that's how it sounded to me old ears.
 
Bill

Like Bill and Tom the vocals sound a little all in the distance and the ride is drowning much, just a few tweaks to the mix Freddy and I am sure you will have another cool song.

Freddy
Yeah, I like this version better. Seemed to be some bits out of sync or something, maybe because of a delay fx?
Anyway, a fun song as usual.

Hey, are you going to be in the path of a hurricane?

Move to Florida they said. You'll love it they said. 
 
This mix is much better Fred. Sounds like the real deal now. Dick Dale lives!
 
Bill

Hi Bjorn.  The Tampa Bay area got lucky again.  Some pretty gusty winds and lots of rain bands here but my heart goes out to the folks in the panhandle.  Thanks for listening and the comments.  I intended to make this song a bit loose but maybe I was a tad too loose.  Thanks again!  BTW you and Lynn put out an excellent song on your recent post.
 
Thanks Daryl.  I really appreciate your comments and thanks for taking the time to listen.
 
Hey Bill.  I am a bit worried about saying this (Fate may be listening) but the Tampa Bay area has been lucky so far.  The Gulf coastal beaches are rather low energy systems. About the only time wave are high enough for surfing is during storm time but hurricane Michael was ridiculous.  The call "Surf's Up" means something different in FL.  I always appreciate your comments. This song is not quite where I want it yet but hopefully is better than it was.  Thanks again.
 
Hello Jesse.  Gee, I was hoping that the echo would give it kind of a spooky feel. Guess it didn't work -- huh?  Thanks for listening and commenting.

Your voice reminds me of Jim Morrison for some reason.  So this sounds like the Doors meet the Ventures.  Neat story too!
 
John B.

Hi Mark.  Thanks for the kind words and encouragement buddy.  Cheque is in the mail (intended humour).
 
Hey John.  Jim Morrison -- I'll take that, thanks. Thanks, also, for taking the time to listen and comment.  This one was a kind of a fun song to do.  That is important to me as I do this stuff to have a good time and doggone, I have found that it is also therapeutic.  It sure will get me out of a bad mood.
 
Hello Wookiee.  Thank you!  I very much appreciate the suggestions that you provided previously.

Hi Larry.  Thanks for the kind comments.  The Halloween season does seem the time for a mystery - doesn't it?  I really liked the recent song that you posted.  Keep them coming.

Hi Doug.  Thanks for listening and thanks for your comments.  I'll have to go back and give the lead vocals another listen.  Thanks again.

Thanks for listening and commenting Paul.  Much appreciated!