RE: Need some advice. on lyrics
2005/02/23 22:05:38
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The only line I don't like is:
everytime i look at the stars now
its your face i can see
and I don't like the bridge. But it doesn't really matter. I mean if you really want some nitpicking that is what I'd pick on.
If I wrote the chorus and I wanted to say what you are saying, I'd say something to the effect of.
everytime i ...., its your face i can see.
I know you don't look the same, everything has changed even that street.
I wonder where you are now, did you ever stop running?
That is just the gist of it, not sure how it would fit. Anyways it's a good song as it is.