New song

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2005/02/25 19:39:55 (permalink)

New song

Here is another song I did using Home Studio, could use some help in mixing if you have time............thankyou
scott

dance of the sea
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    RE: New song 2005/02/25 20:19:17 (permalink)
    I thnk you need to relax..everything sounds so, I dunno..forced. Like you are thinking to yourself "I cant mess this up", esp the plucking at the beginning, very robotic, almost sounds like a "lesson" or something.

    Good try tho.

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    RE: New song 2005/02/25 21:02:51 (permalink)
    Thanks I'll try that, I did try for a hammer effect I guess I got it but it didn't work

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    RE: New song 2005/02/26 11:38:33 (permalink)
    Scott,

    Pretty good song. But there are big timing issues between drums, bass and rythm guitar. If you can solve that, it will sound much smoother.
    Vocals and rythm giutar sound a bit thin.

    hth.
    Melf
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