Hooks

ORIGINAL: smalltimeent

I am looking for someone who writes hooks for rap song. The song I am writing is about my uncle who died yesterday in a car accident. If any of you have any ideas or a good hook for it please post.

Wow, my aunt and uncle died in a car accident (together) in Aug. '98. I feel for you. I wrote a song called "Holidays" for them. Not too sure if the holidays meant anything to you, when thinking of them, but it did for me. It is a rock style chorus (poppy rock, rather than heavy rock) so I'm not too sure if it'll work for you as a result. I would have to remix the song, as it definitely needs it, but if you're interested let me know by posting here and I'll post a link up for you. Please do NOT feel obligated to say yes...if it's not your thing, then it's not your thing.

ORIGINAL: smalltimeent

Sorry to hear that my aunt was in the truck when it happen. I dont want to explain what happen really. I all for it, post the link please.

Here's the link:
http://cdplusdirect.com/holidays.mp3

This is an old song (2001) and the things I think would need fixing in the mix are:
Vocals: Much less reverb
Snare: Way too loud and too muddy for my taste
Overall EQ of the song.

If you would like to use anything in this song just let me know. Only thing I ask is recognition. Just give the credit where the credit is due whenever you post or use the track. No money involved (unless you makes millions and then I want my cut! )

I cant find a link to a song but, can you sing r&b? I really need a r&b singer.

Okay, thats cool but I still would like to do a song with you. Can you pm me your e-mail?

You're right you can't. I thought this was like the other forums. You can send it to guttaman14@yahoo.com