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Mack
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2005/03/14 19:22:59 (permalink)

Comment on new song appreciated

I just posted my first song called "Helen". I would appreciate any comments.

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Mack

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    JCinNJ
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    RE: Comment on new song appreciated 2005/03/14 19:45:54 (permalink)
    nice song and nice tribute Mack. Tell us something about what you used to make it. A very nice mellow first post. You probably want to post it in the pop/pop rock or something similar. If yoy listen to the other songs in the genre you posted in, you will see what I mean.

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    RE: Comment on new song appreciated 2005/03/14 19:48:28 (permalink)
    Mack

    Everything fit together very nicely. Tone and arrangement.
    But, even for this type of song, the Rain/Pain line pushed it beyond what a man can take. Up until then you managed to turn the phrases better. Like "hear the birds sing", " us calling your name" was just enough to cut syrup.

    Don

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    Newer Song "River", let me know if you don't like it.
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