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korn3lius
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2005/03/29 03:55:48 (permalink)

milk tea

I called this song "milk tea" because when I drink a cup of milk tea, have to relax and enjoy my time, the inspiration come itself, so I picked up my guitar and play it. take a listen to this relax song, I need your suggestion about everything, music, mixing, etc...thx
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    pilfa
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/29 05:02:43 (permalink)
    i am stuck at work so cant say much for the mix as i can only listen on headphones..... But sounded good. Nice guitar work.
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/29 14:29:40 (permalink)
    Nice tune. Nice parts. The guitars sound a touch brittle... mic'ing the guitar instead of direct in thru the piezo would probably add a lot. To distinguish the parts better, you might roll of the highs a little on the background guitar(s). Also, you might drop the drum loop for a measure here or there, or try to change loops or even throw in an extra cymbal here and there to make it feel less like a loop.

    My two cents...

    Nice melody... Nice harmony...

    Mike Lockett
    http://mikelockett.info
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    korn3lius
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/29 15:49:41 (permalink)
    Hi Pilfa and Mike,

    thanks for listening my song. really appreciate your suggestion
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/29 16:09:41 (permalink)
    Nice tune - relaxing and easy going. My #1 beef is that you're out of tune. That should never be allowed on a song like this one. My #2 beef is the tones - a mic'd guiar would sound much nicer.

    That's it. Nice idea.

    Thanks,

    Dan Monaghan
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    korn3lius
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/29 16:15:51 (permalink)
    Hi Dan,

    thanks for listening, really appreciate it.
    u said that the song's out of tune, can u tell me more specific what's time is it?
    I use guitar internal pickup record the guitar sound, didn't like it very much since it lack of those acoustic sense..

    thanks dude for your comment
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/29 22:01:44 (permalink)

    ORIGINAL: korn3lius

    Hi Dan,

    thanks for listening, really appreciate it.
    u said that the song's out of tune, can u tell me more specific what's time is it?
    I use guitar internal pickup record the guitar sound, didn't like it very much since it lack of those acoustic sense..

    thanks dude for your comment

    I think he's talking about the lead guitar. You may have layed that part last, and not thought to re-tune before-hand.
    Drums are a bit buried, and a vocal would be nice.
    Be sure to re-post when the track is finished! It definatly has potential! Peace....

    The best is always yet to come. Now...shut up and make some noise!
    A small sample of my music... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/turtlebend2.htm
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    korn3lius
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/30 05:08:01 (permalink)
    Hi Sonic,

    thanks for your time to listening, really appreciate your comment..
    I'm considering to add some vocal..hm...let me see
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/30 12:53:01 (permalink)
    ORIGINAL: korn3lius

    Hi Dan,

    thanks for listening, really appreciate it.
    u said that the song's out of tune, can u tell me more specific what's time is it?
    I use guitar internal pickup record the guitar sound, didn't like it very much since it lack of those acoustic sense..

    thanks dude for your comment

    I can't say for sure, but it sounds like the G string is flat and the B string is sharp. The open G note (third string) and the 3rd fret D note (B string) are supposed to form a perfect 5th which is an interval with no "beats." Your 5th is out of tune because it's too wide and has fast "beats" - I.E. the B string is sharp or the G string is flat or a combonation of the two.

    Nice song, though.

    Thanks,

    Dan Monaghan
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    korn3lius
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    RE: milk tea 2005/03/30 13:57:58 (permalink)
    ic..ic..good ear Dan.
    i got your points now. I've thought i have a problem with my guitar 5th string, I'll try to tune it correctly but still heard weird when i press C in 5th string (I transpose this song -1 , so the G heard G flat).

    thanks for your reply Dan, really appreciate it
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