Listened to "Electric Funeral".
I'm certainly no expert in this area, and I've not heard the original version of this tune,
but here's my 2 cents:
First I think your guitar playing is dead on. Very expressive for the genre.
You must have played this piece a lot--sounds like you are pretty comfortable with it.
Your vocals aren't perfect, but they sound a lot (perhaps annoyingly) like Ozzy's
on the songs they play on the radio [That's who you're trying to imitate right?]
Love the section from 3:15 - 4:10 -- the drums and the guitar seem to rock very
nicely together! Found myself replaying this section times.
Your Soundclick web page is cool-looking. But I had a hard time reading the text
underneath all those green bubbles. Perhaps a different color scheme or something
might help...
- john
post edited by zgraf - 2005/05/23 20:58:37