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korn3lius
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2005/05/27 12:32:52 (permalink)

morning light

Hi,
Here's my new song,another mandarin song. I call it morning_light.
I need your ear to listen and give me some suggestion and advise..song,mixing,vocal,or
anything else.

thank you for listening,
Edy

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    Gray Crosby
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    RE: morning light 2005/05/27 13:20:54 (permalink)
    Edy:

    Good to hear from you. This is really neat. Id admit that I was surprised when it turned out to be a "mandarin rap".....I was expecing a high lilting female vocal to come in.......the music is so nice....I hear a female singing something different to it.

    The music sounds great. Its hard (actually impossible) to give a real opinion vocal/lyric wise without understanding the language at all. THe vocal did sound a little pitchy here and there...but perhaps it fits in the context of the lyrics.

    Hope all is well with you.

    Gray

    (Edy and I collaborated on a few tunes on my website ..."The Plan" and "Mystery of Life"......if you want to hear another side of him) He's talented.
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    Steven Bell
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    RE: morning light 2005/05/27 13:41:53 (permalink)
    I really like the nature sounds during the intro.

    The light passage on the left side seems a bit stiff and the synth sound seems a bit cheesy. But it's not all that bad as I re-listen.

    There is a sound on the far right side during the choruses that really sticks out as just "noise" to my ears. It comes in on the down beat every two measures.

    The high vocal note during the chorus could be sung with just a little more power. It's probably hard to sing, I'm guessing.

    Overall, the sound and the balance of the mix seems pretty good to me.


    Steven Bell
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    Top of the Hill Music
    http://www.topofthehillmusic.com/
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    korn3lius
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    RE: morning light 2005/05/27 14:41:11 (permalink)
    Hi..Gray,
    I'm glad to see you again. thanks for replying. really appreciate your comment
    just like you said, my vocal sometimes out of tune, so I record it many times to make it better...once again, thanks for listening

    Edy
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    korn3lius
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    RE: morning light 2005/05/27 14:49:05 (permalink)
    Hi Steven,
    thanks for listening and replying, really appreciate it.
    the chorus part, I add some synth so it will feel different with verse and bridge.

    and just like u said, I'm really want my vocal more powerful in chorus part...haha
    but..this song key seems too high for me..I'd try my best.
    once again thanks for listening and replying

    Edy
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