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updated-newer version-pure by :10:
I updated this track...not much changed...snipped alittle out in the middle where i thought it was to long...sorry...still has the long intro, but i like how it opens....and i cut the end back alittle to...not sure i like how it ends...might have to go back later and fix it. anyway...check it out if you feel like it...thanks at my soundclick site (just click my music) 
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crabtwins
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/10 02:53:38
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10 this is "ill". You got skills. A bit long but at this point it s irrelevant. Could be used in a long scene or to just chill. Good work. I wish I was as willing to share my work.  later
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/10 07:54:02
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thanks crabtwins: I thought it was a bit long to...but now listening to it over and over...i like it the way it is...puts me in a good mood.  besides...i finaly got to use my spanish pluck from the plugsound free plugin. I have always wanted to use it..just never found a spot for it in any of my songs. thanks for listening.
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/10 11:28:17
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the intro was really quite creepy. your mix is flawless as always, why do you ask? i thought maybe that acoustic guitar part could use more reverb/delay because it sounds just a touch flat. the riff is quite surprising though. kinda renaissance sounding. this did have a lot of transitions, but using bits and pieces of repetition helped keep it somewhat unified. does it need something--maybe. i think some sort of melodic vocal sample that could repeat occasionally throughout to tie the sections together might be a good addition. the words to the song should be as follows: A day without rain is like a day without sunshine these aren't my words. it's by the great poet A.R. Ammons. i think somehow it might fit this song. i am of course kidding by asserting that you need specific lyrics, but i do like this poem and i think it might somehow fit.
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/10 11:41:14
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your mix is flawless as always, why do you ask? I had trouble with this one for some reason...I ended up mixing it down in headphones because it was about 2 or 3 in the morning...didnt want to wake anyone up. thanks for the suggestions...I like the idea of a female sample...I do have the slight breathing girl through out the piece...but it could always use another sample. anyway...thanks for listening and commenting. ...some good ideas there. I really like how this one turned out...maybe i will just leave it the way it is....its really starting to grow on me. 
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/11 09:17:54
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Great opening. I must say this is brilliant and definitely up there with your best imo. The mix was excellent, really grungy and thick, nice.  I agree that a female vocal sample would be a good addition, but not overused though. Great stuff again from you Sean, really enjoyed it.
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/11 10:01:58
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hey mon---when are you gon put out an album? preferably in a dj friendly 12" format. I need some good downtempo illbient stuff like this to work into my sets. No really, man you just keep bringin the hotness. I really like this one, though. Aside from your intros, (which are a tad bit long IMO), you have such an innate sense of harmony, i think, and a real feel for layering up samples that work together. I feel that this piece really grows and evolves, which is often missing in most music nowadays. Big up, once again. Great stuff to listen to on a saturday mornin by the way.
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/11 10:56:47
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Wasup Sean. You must have alot of time on your hands. Everytime you make something it just gets better and better. Love your stuff. Keep up the Great Work. Can't wait to here more sick stuff from you.
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/11 11:06:42
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thanks blipp/ da berzurkur/ and darksynergy(by the way...whens the cd coming out? ) the album wont be out for awhile....I am being really picky about what is going on it. thanks for listening guys. OT: my webs been down for two days now...this service is really starting to piss me off....dont use savinghosting.com...well, at least their plesky server...its always down. 
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/11 13:40:29
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Hi Sean.
Checking in now!
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After a listen, I can say this is indeed up to par at least with your other stuff at least production wise. It didn't quite do much for me like your last 2 pieces...er 3 actually counting the collab with Orphan.
The guitar was totally out of his poor little element. That spanish guitar (DIMENSION right?) is a HUGELY overused instrument in trance circles nowadays...everyone goin' for that chill/summer in IBIZA sound...so for me it sounded alienated by all your spectacular other ambient stuff goin' on around it. Thats just a trancers vantage point though. Melody was alright, but then again...you're not a melodic kinda guy.
Unlike your other stuff, this one didn't really "play" in my mind as nice as your other movie soundtrack-ey compostions. Instead of a drooling alien about to gorge himself on an unknowing innocent 12 yr.old girl.... I saw a big tanker truck dispensing his load of diesel into big underground tanks. It seemed to sound like a big truck idling.
The track holds its own though because of the great panning and FX you use. Just wasnt a big fan of the vibe on this one. 
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/11 14:21:50
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maybe it's not so great that Dimension has such a nice variety of great guitar sounds. I ended up reaching for one in my latest project. i think this is another really good :10: track -- maybe not up there with the A+ tracks, but a solid B or B+. The steady pulse of the low buzz got to me a little, but maybe cause i'm soliciting more comments on my work from live players and they like a little more feel. otoh, i didn't think it was too long at all the structure semed about right to me. what i don't understand is why :10:'s work isn't more widely played and known.
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/11 14:44:26
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what i don't understand is why :10:'s work isn't more widely played and known. yeah...me too sorry DA...cant win them all... and the spanish pluck is from plugsound free.....I didnt know dimension had one. thanks for the feedback every one.
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/12 17:40:38
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I loved everything about this track. Sometimes your beats can get a little tripped up, but you never stray so far from the beat that I can no longer grasp the percussion. I thought the spanish guitar 'plucky' sound was in perfect contrast to the dark bed behind it - and the melody itself was entirely appropriate without calling attention to itself. Very understated. I also didn't think the song was too long 0 in fact I looked at the time indicator just as I started really "getting into" this track, and the 4:00 mark had just elapsed. No gripes here. I could do with more of this happy/sad interplay.
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/12 18:32:54
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thanks Kev......
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RE: updated-pure by :10:
2005/06/16 23:44:18
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bump: updated :please read first post..... thanks.
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