First ever sonar song. guitar solo "dont make me cry"

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bobby
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2005/09/29 23:10:20 (permalink)

First ever sonar song. guitar solo "dont make me cry"

Hope you like it a little rock solo balld guitar in one.

http://rascomputers.com/dont%20make%20me%20cry%20final.mp3

Its my first ever full sonar recording. Teh guitar is amplitube and the drums are bfd. Any comments woudl be great
post edited by bobby - 2005/10/01 22:21:56
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    bobby
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    RE: New Solo guitar song "dont make me cry" 2005/10/01 20:32:11 (permalink)
    cant someone tell me what they think please?
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    RE: New Solo guitar song "dont make me cry" 2005/10/01 22:35:37 (permalink)
    Just a silly thing but never use the word final in a version identification. There is no such thing as final version. Just kidding.
    For a first song it is fine. Sounds like you are having fun. There are a few timing issues you might want to work on. That would be my 1st suggestion. You could line audio up to measures, or use a click track, commercial loop, metronome to start with. You could delete the commercial loop/click track after you got a few tracks layed down. I like the song.

    Max Arwood
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    bobby
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    RE: New Solo guitar song "dont make me cry" 2005/10/02 00:49:41 (permalink)
    Thank you , i am glad you like the song. I know its alittle off butyes i will try to tighten it down for the next one. thank you for listening at least.
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    RE: New Solo guitar song "dont make me cry" 2005/10/04 14:57:57 (permalink)
    Hi Bobby. I would like to hear another version with a clean (non-distorted) guitar sound. Maybe a couple other versions with different tonal variations on the lead guitar would be worth trying. Also, I think it could use another section so as to be less repetitious.
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    RE: New Solo guitar song "dont make me cry" 2005/10/04 19:31:29 (permalink)
    It does repeat that already over used progression quite a lot.
    First recordings aren't always this good, so be proud of that.
    Try some chord variations, and as suggested, different sounding guitars and drums.
    It sounds fine, it's just too long, and too same all the way through.
    Nice recording job!
    HTH


    Stephen

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