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2005/10/10 20:30:52 (permalink)

constructive criticism please

Hello ,
These are some of the most recent songs I’ve recorded . I was hoping to get some constructive criticism .
I’m not looking for criticism on the performance but rather the mix .I always feel like I’m missing something but I can’t put my finger on it .

Life Dash - Rock - Metal Life Dash

Flat Broke - Punk Rock Flat Broke

D.O.G. - Heavy Metal D.O.G.

Just a heads up ,the Flat Broke and DOG song both have an F-Bomb

Thanks,
Jason

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    RE: constructive criticism please 2005/10/11 00:50:04 (permalink)
    Well, I just listened to Life Dash. Cool stuff. Couldn't hear the bass though, and this song could really fill out with some bottom end. Also, you may want to make definite markers at different sections of the song. Then play with drums up or guitars up and down on choruses or verses so the song kind of breathes. Also, think of depth...everything sounded like they were all coming from the same point of origin depth-wise.

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    RE: constructive criticism please 2005/10/11 05:20:30 (permalink)
    Thank's for the suggestions. Your right, it could use more bass. I like the idea of
    volume changes too. Thanks again.
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