My first two songs...

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2006/03/29 11:28:43 (permalink)

My first two songs...

Please check out my first two songs. The are downtempo drum and bass kinda things.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pageartist.cfm?bandID=515750
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    Lil Burna
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    RE: My first two songs... 2006/03/29 12:15:11 (permalink)
    good on ur first beats man....

    just my opinion but -- i dont like to use the pre-made patterns because
    theres prolly 50 other people who's used em too---
    so i would just try to make my own melodies--
    if not then alter the pre-made ones...

    -- my ears focus on the pre-made patterns---
    maybe cuz i've heard em all---lol

    but thats just a thought homie

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    Quirky
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    RE: My first two songs... 2006/03/29 18:39:17 (permalink)

    ORIGINAL: Lil Burna

    just my opinion but -- i dont like to use the pre-made patterns because
    theres prolly 50 other people who's used em too---
    so i would just try to make my own melodies--
    if not then alter the pre-made ones...

    -- my ears focus on the pre-made patterns---



    Totally agree. That's some good advice right there.

    Say what? House music all-night long.


    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=515716 - Experiments in house/tech/dance
    http://www.myspace.com/quirkytunes
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    Markus Copol
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    RE: My first two songs... 2006/03/29 18:57:34 (permalink)
    same thing. I think " Transcendence," you need to lower the volume for the synth in the bacground, Its coming off strong. This style is kind of tricky, and I think the drums are the main problem. The drums you are using giving it more than a hip hop direction than electronica propably because its pre made like Lil burna said.
    if you add a different drum roll and pick it up a notch it will carry the beat further At the moment its giving a feeling of a breakbeat...unless that what you wanted

    keep us posted with your work :)
    post edited by Markus Copol - 2006/03/29 19:09:49
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    RE: My first two songs... 2006/03/29 19:35:11 (permalink)
    I have to agree on the drums, it definitely had more of a hip hop feel than a trip hop one.
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    scarpdog
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    RE: My first two songs... 2006/03/29 20:29:14 (permalink)
    Thanks for the feedback.

    I'm guessing one of the big limitations of Kinetic is that the entire song has to have the same tempo, correct?
    No way to add a slow or fast bridge.
    post edited by scarpdog - 2006/03/29 20:36:24
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    RE: My first two songs... 2006/03/29 21:14:56 (permalink)
    yeah the bpm is limited. but reason is the same way.
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    RE: My first two songs... 2006/03/30 15:58:55 (permalink)
    Aey yo Daug, just wanted to say thank you for appreciating my work the othat dayI knew my peeps are in the house. Sure I can help you out with mo beats, but at least I know I got peeps wit me . Yo my record on da way so keep the same support homie.
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