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Markmusicman
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2007/02/16 20:08:17 (permalink)

New Song

Here is a new song that I just finished, Used Sonar 6. Let eme know what you think.

http://www.markmusicman.com/mp3/waiting_so_long.m3u

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Mark
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    cjlinus
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    RE: New Song 2007/02/16 20:15:24 (permalink)
    Very nice mood, I like your vocal arrangement. Good guitar work. Overall I like the song and mix.



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    RE: New Song 2007/02/16 21:05:44 (permalink)
    Mark,

    Nice up vibe and motion in the instruments. Great guitar chops. Very tasty and appropriate solo. Acoustic, drums, bass and rhythm guitar all present in the mix. Vocals done well. Good use of reverb in the mix too. Good job on this.

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    RE: New Song 2007/02/17 12:49:52 (permalink)
    Mark, really good song. Good vocals and harmonies that kind of remind me of the Finn brothers. Great guitars. Drums and bass sound good in the mix, good mix overall. Everything works well.
    Mark

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    RE: New Song 2007/02/17 14:37:38 (permalink)
    Mark, this song really flows nicely... love the lively acoustic feel. Vocals and harmonies sound great, very solid and easy to listen to. Very nice electric guitar solo! Mix was very well balanced, though I found myself wanting to hear a little more boost in the low end. Excellent work, look forward to hearing more!

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    RE: New Song 2007/02/17 19:56:25 (permalink)
    Hey Mark,
    nice tune, well delivered and balance wise this all sounds good, i just feel you need a little extra body and weight added to the overall mix to finish it right.

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    Maxprizm
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    RE: New Song 2007/02/17 20:24:42 (permalink)
    Nice guitar playing, nice catchy chorus. Very good vocals and recording, nice and clean. I felt the arrangement could have been condensed a little more. There are spots (most noticeable in the 1st verse) where the hi hats sound like they are perfectly synched with the snare (mainly the double hits) making it sound a little unatural and well, programmed. The are just nitpicks, as I thought the overall sound was very good and the mix was pretty balanced. Good work.
    post edited by Maxprizm - 2007/02/17 20:47:19

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    AsherLongley
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    RE: New Song 2007/02/17 21:54:58 (permalink)
    Bravo. Nice Irish reel sound. I immediately relaxed when listening to it. I forgot I was listening to a "non-professional" work. What I mean is, it sounded great and had no suspicion of being anything but pro.

    I agree, a little more sound on the low end and it's done. Maybe some cleanup at the very end of some of the lead parts as they trail off.

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    RE: New Song 2007/02/17 22:57:16 (permalink)
    Mark, very nice and melodic song you've presented here! I really enjoyed listening to it.
    This is one of those songs where one starts to envision a 'music video' right from the start. Very lifely, very positive and very harmonic. Well done, and thanks for sharing it with us.
    Heinz.




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    RE: New Song 2007/02/17 23:05:45 (permalink)
    Very very nice to the ears,

    actualy i like the mix the way it is, its crystal clear, nothing a little low end EQ couldnt
    fix as far as dept as they say just dont lose that crystal clear sound you got.
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