For You

Edit:   I took this song down because I had posted an earlier version by mistake.  Sheesh,  I didn't notice something as basic as that.
 
 
 
For You

https://soundcloud.com/orygun/for-you

I wrote this song for my wife.

As usual, my singing is barely passable and after a while I just say that's as good as it's gonna get.
And I just noticed that the vocal track is too soft on Sound Cloud. A later fix.
Thanks for listening.


For my wife

Been a long time now   
wanted to say this to you
Never knew how to say it though
But maybe in a song...
I don't know what I'd be without you

When we're apart I realize what you mean to me
You are the one who  I need,  you make me feel complete
You are the one at my side and  it's still so true
you are as beautiful as when  I first met  you

We view the world in different ways , in that we do agree
we share the best we have to give, not You nor I but We
Wish I had said these words before. They were always there
Feelings are hard for me to say. Hard for me to share.    

So you should know how grateful I am to have you in my life
I really do love you so,  I'm grateful you're my wife.

I'm sure your wife loved it - I did. Your voice sounds pretty good to me.
 
Nice tune.

lovely heartfelt song Bjorn - I hope your wife liked it

Very nice demo of your lovely song, Bjorn. 
~Allan
 

I liked it - a touching love song.  Your vocal sounds alright to me - for some reason I was thinking a double on the lead vocal would be interesting.

Nice.

Thanks for the comments everyone.  Lynn, I wasn't sure what you meant by phrasing so I listened to what I had posted and d'oh I had posted an earlier version by mistake.  So it's not there anymore.