eric paul
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Lynn
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Very pretty song. With a tad less reverb this would be so intimate. As it is, it sounds spacious but lacking in warmth. It's all there, just so far away.
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notnat
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love your tone on this one... nice touch...
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radio
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Hi I like how this sounds , has this jam type thing going on . Needs something to break things up a bit between sections to hook the listener in as you play through the song .
I'm hearing some interesting guitar sounds and playing all the way through your tune with no real changes to keep the listener interested from start to finish .
Can't wit to hear it when you get done with it .
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bandontherun19
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It sounds like you created a nice laid backing track to play to and had fun playing to it :-)
I would mix the drums up a little throughout, and some of the other background? Even if it's the same chord progression throughout, bleed some things in or out, dynamics etc. The guitar is the only dynamic element. Which can hold a listener for a bit, but ideally it needs to breath a bit.
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Guitarhacker
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Nice song and good tone.
Enjoyable.
I kinda thought the verb was just a bit to heavy for my taste. And one note at the top there that sounded like it could use a fix.
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lhansen
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Very smooth guitar playing. I liked this. Beef up the percussion a tad and throw a few more changes in there to keep it interesting and dynamic as it's a long song, and I think you're all set.
post edited by lhansen - 2012/02/13 10:45:00
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LanceJ
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This is a good background piece. It has a steady rhythm allowing the listener to listen but not needing to be involved.
I don't mean that is a bad way. If you want more involvement from the listener just add some change to some of the sections.
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Lance
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eric paul
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Re:Grace remix a little
2012/02/13 17:52:19
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thanks guys very good constructive suggestons well receive thanks again eric
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Re:Grace remix a little
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Lovely piece of music. Your guitar playing is exquisite. As others have said here, being just over five minutes long, it either needs something extra to keep hold of people's attention or shorten it to about 3 and a half minutes. What I would do (and that is definitely NOT what many others would do!), is to add some very quiet cellos and violins at around 3:08. There is a dreamy feel to the music which some strings would add to. Nothing fancy, just playing chords. Very much look forward to hearing more of your music.
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