Grey Sunday take 2 now *Crazy Little Box*

Interesting ... I think you should work on the phrasing of many of the instruments as they perform. Also, having a little better defined structure to the song would probably help the listener. The recording of each of the instruments seems fairly good, but could use some work in the mix. Lots of instruments playing at the same time will have a tendency to overlap in the spectral space and in this case they seem to compete for the listeners attention, even though I suspect this may have been part of your intentions for the composition.   Frank Zappa was a master at this style in many of his orchestrations and he paid an enormous amount of attention to each instruments contribution to the composition.  Good luck with your endeavors. I think you are striding down a path that few here attempt.