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HTTK - Scandalous Grace
https://soundcloud.com/beaglesound/hallelujah-to-the-king All crits welcome! Scandalous Grace - "Hallelujah to the King" Reece Bain Words & Music, Lead Vocals, Piano, Drums, Engineering & Production Michael Hanson Bass, Acoustic Rhythm, Elec Lead, BGVs Sean Peifer Electric Rhythm, Elec Lead, Acoustic Rhythm, BGVs Jeremy Peifer and all: handclaps
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/25 20:45:27
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The vox seems buried to me and when I can hear them they're pumping a bit to much for my taste.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/26 17:04:09
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Thanks my friend, new mix up now reduced compression on lead vox and raised their level.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/27 13:39:29
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Sorry pup. Still sounds pretty much the same to me.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/27 13:46:56
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I like it Beags - good mix generally but the main vox seem a bit dry/over compressed? I can't make it out but the vox sound sorta hurts to listen to
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/27 20:42:22
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I like the song and the message. My only nit is the lead voc is too dry. I'd add just a tad of reverb. John B.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/28 07:53:42
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I usually don't listen to this style but I liked what I heard. Great job!
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/30 12:21:32
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Ok, I think I've got it now! after listening to your comments and trying to figure out the problem, I finally determined that the preamp was in saturation during the recording of those last vocals, so they were distorted going into sonar. new mix up now! thanks That or Ed! Daryl - thanks mate! I think I've got the verb adjusted for the current vocal track. let me know what you think. and the harshness was due to the preamp being in saturation - distortion was added to the vox when I laid down that track. I think this track is better now. John B. - thanks! I believe I've fixed the vocal track now, let me know what you think of the new mix! Antti - thanks! I appreciate it very much!
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/30 13:11:12
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Vox sounds harsh to me ... Otherwise sounds like a great mix to me.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/30 17:27:29
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Way better than the first mix. Now you may need some tweaking of the vox. Maybe low cut @ 100-200HZ. And maybe just a splash of reverb?
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/07/31 21:33:16
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Thanks BobF! I appreciate the listen and feedback! I've adjusted the EQ and the verb on the lead vox and uploaded a new version! thanks again! thanks That or Ed! see above comments I appreciate the ears my ol' pal!
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/01 15:54:09
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/01 17:01:21
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/01 21:13:16
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Hey Reece, really liked this. Didn't hear the other version the guys were commenting on, but this one sounds pretty good vocally. Your voice has come a long way man. Really good. Mix is audible. If I had to comment on anything, the instruments seem a little too stripped out to me as far as their actual sound size. Like maybe you ripped too much low end out? Or mastered out too much low mids/mids? Everything just sounds small and bright. If one of my students gave me this, we'd call it a poppy mix and experiment with what types of low mids and mids we could add. It sounds like one of those auto-mastering presets just had its way with the song in my opinion. Most of them strip out mids/low mids, add some low end and some high end presence and they call it a day. Hats a bit crispy with highs. Bass, I can feel more than hear what it's doing. Would be better with a little more identity in the bass if possible. But everything is audible which to me means "acceptable mix" in reality. Just giving you the specifics because I figured you'd want me to. But I'm really impressed with your voice....and the writing on this song is awesome. Really nice job man! I so miss hanging out on this side of the forum. Going to try and stop around more often at least to listen to guys like you and a few others. :) -Danny
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/02 12:35:07
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Hey Danny, Thanks for stopping in and commenting on this song. Reece, Sean and myself have been collaborating on songs as the virtual band, Scandalous Grace. We have had a great time with this over the last 2 years. Your comments are very helpful and we will take all of your suggestions into consideration.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/02 13:19:30
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Have not listened to any of the previous mixes. To me the vocal sounds a little to dry and the kit is a little to wide for my personal furry taste. I was also finding trouble getting some instrument spacial definition, could just be tired furry lugs. But generally the mix is close just a tweak or to more should nail it. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/03 00:15:54
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michaelhanson Hey Danny, Thanks for stopping in and commenting on this song. Reece, Sean and myself have been collaborating on songs as the virtual band, Scandalous Grace. We have had a great time with this over the last 2 years. Your comments are very helpful and we will take all of your suggestions into consideration.
Hey Mike, I must confess I didn't realize you were in this. I didn't read the first post like I should have. Apologies my brother. I'm trying to stop around here in between clients and what little down time I have, so for now I'm doing quick drive bys. Lol! Yeah, I really enjoyed it man. Sounds like you all enjoyed what you were doing. That's what it's all about. We'll done. :)
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/03 08:40:05
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Danny - thanks for the listen, the great words and the constructive comments! The guys and I are working out what we need to change now. I'll post another mix soon. Wookiee - thanks for the listen and comments! I'll work on it some more. stay tuned!
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/03 08:56:17
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Hey Beag, I really like the current mix. Sounds great - bravo!
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/03 14:48:37
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Good song, Reece. I remember when you were taking the vocal lessons. You have really come a long way since then. I couldn't sing a song like this to save my life. You have the right voice on the right song. You probably remember that I am not the mix guy of the Pugtones so I can't offer too much there. It sounds good, buddy!
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/04 10:53:49
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evadianepug Good song, Reece. I remember when you were taking the vocal lessons. You have really come a long way since then. I couldn't sing a song like this to save my life. You have the right voice on the right song. You probably remember that I am not the mix guy of the Pugtones so I can't offer too much there. It sounds good, buddy!
Glad I'm not the only one that noticed the improvement in his voice. We sometimes concentrate so much on production that we may miss a really great performance. That's one of the issues we all can pick up from time to time being engineers or hobbyists etc. I actually like when I could listen to something and didn't know what production was. It allowed me to enjoy music for what it was, not what I felt it should or could be. :) These days I try to only comment on production if something sticks out to me as "OK this definitely sounds like it can be buffed out a little." I feel like you.....like I'm almost not qualified to comment on production due to "art" being so subjective. Who am I to tell someone what colors their portrait should be? We know some of the guys like to hear the opinions of others. I just try to stick to the blatantly oobvious stuff and it keeps me out of trouble. Lol! :)
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/04 11:41:05
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Danny, I feel like you.....like I'm almost not qualified to comment on production due to "art" being so subjective. Who am I to tell someone what colors their portrait should be? We know some of the guys like to hear the opinions of others. I just try to stick to the blatantly oobvious stuff and it keeps me out of trouble. Lol! :)
Funny that you say that Danny, I actually trust your engineering skills immensely. I, however, feel that way all of the time. I find myself rarely commenting on production as well, music (art) being such a subjective medium. I find it hard to critique songs, lyrics and production, even within our own band. I find myself only pointing out the things that I feel are obvious, as well. If it is a song that either Reece or Sean have written, I always defer to them to make the final decisions on their creations. As a group, we have all fallen into the trap from time to time, that we should have spoken up more about something that we thought, wasn't quite right. That is why this songs forum is soooooo valuable to all of us. It helps immensely to have other ears hear what we have been working on for months and have, maybe become to accustom to hearing critically.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/04 13:22:47
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michaelhanson Funny that you say that Danny, I actually trust your engineering skills immensely. I, however, feel that way all of the time. I find myself rarely commenting on production as well, music (art) being such a subjective medium. I find it hard to critique songs, lyrics and production, even within our own band. I find myself only pointing out the things that I feel are obvious, as well. If it is a song that either Reece or Sean have written, I always defer to them to make the final decisions on their creations. As a group, we have all fallen into the trap from time to time, that we should have spoken up more about something that we thought, wasn't quite right. That is why this songs forum is soooooo valuable to all of us. It helps immensely to have other ears hear what we have been working on for months and have, maybe become to accustom to hearing critically.
I'm glad somebody does...lol! Thanks Mike. :) Truth be told, some people don't want to hear opinions. They can get defensive. We have all experienced this, myself included. But I think some of the defensive stuff is due to how someone decides to tell you their feelings. The important thing is tactfulness as well as respect, as we are, in my opinion, commenting on "someone's child". (as I like to refer to songs.) Hmm, there's a sentence gone wrong...lol...I think you get what I'm saying. :) I really think the key is treading softly, yet you have to be honest and also open-minded. There was a time on here where some of the posters would just speak out in ways that were like a king on a throne barking at people. Those types ruin it for people and make others not want to post. We don't need to walk on eggshells, but we don't need to annihilate someone to the point where they may not want to post a song ever again. Now as a group, you have to handle things a little differently. And where the issue can be there, you're never in front of each other physically. Text can get lost so easily man....it's just unreal as you know. Add in someone from another country that may have different ways of saying things to where there, it's common...here we take offense...and bang, instant issue. Always try your best to communicate with your band mates. Sometimes we may need to bend a little and allow, other times....well, you have to tell it like it is while always being respectful and you should be ok. I find in my real original band, I only comment on something the guys offer that has little to no value. Like if they decide to put a power jam right in the middle of a pop song, in some situations, I don't think it is the right move for the song. I love that they play their butts off...but for me, it has to be about the song. Then again, here's the reverse....if you have a hook that can draw people in, who's to say you can't do a 4 bar power jam in a pop song? it's less predictable, even if I may think it's not the right move. See, there we go again with "subjectivity." LOL! There is no right or wrong....other than to comment on something that might be blatantly obvious. :)
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/05 10:44:49
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Very powerful and moving song, Reece. Vocals sounded fine to me. I personally found the hats and cymbals prominent to the point of almost being distracting, but maybe that's just me. Towards the end, I kept wishing for a tambourine to come in and take over for the cymbals. But these are just nits... overall excellent work by all.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/05 17:00:14
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Awesome job on this one! Reece, your vocals really do sound good! The only suggestion I might have is that the harmonies/bgv's were a bit hard to hear. However, this could be an artifact of my cheap (cheap not just inexpensive) system.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/06 17:18:27
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Danny - thanks again for your ears and advice! I have readjusted the EQ on some of the instruments and adjusted the EQ on the Master bus (there was no "canned" master plugin - just EQ and compression with my own settings). I have also adjusted the kick and bass EQ and brought them up in the mix more. I appreciate your feedback! Phil - thanks man! I appreciate it and appreciate the feedback! I have adjusted the EQ on the master bus and it has made a change on the overall sound of the drums, I don't know if it has addressed your concern directly or not, but the drums have been adjusted in the mix by doing so. let me know what you think! Freddy! thanks for stopping in and listening and for your comments! I have boosted the BGVs in the latest mix - let me know what you think! thanks again everyone for the great feedback! we really appreciate it!
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/09 17:46:43
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Overall the mix sounds pretty good here, but I've only listened to the latest version. I would personally still add a bit of ambiance to the lead vocal using delay and/or reverb, but that's subjective - the vocals themselves sound really good. I also like the way the harmonies surround it.
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/11 08:27:40
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Thanks so much for the listen and comments Steve! I appreciate the suggestion and I'll look into it!
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/11 17:37:25
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Hi Reece and co, y'all are getting good at this, excellent vocal performances, as a guitarist I have to say turn it up and the solo is way to short ; ) Rik
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Re: HTTK - Scandalous Grace
2016/08/11 17:41:59
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Man, your voice has gotten so much stronger these past few years. Sounds good from here.
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