Hello Fellow Traveler (Now WITHOUT Reverb on Vocals)

My first reaction is a bit too much reverb on the voices. But maybe that was the effect you wanted.
 
I do like the lyric/sentiment.

The vocals do sound a little to wet Freddy but it is a nice song with a valuable message, thanks for sharing.

Nice one, Freddy!  In spite of the reverb, your voice sounds like butter.  It was a little hard to make out all the words, but you got the message across.  We're of like minds.

Hi Bapu.  Good ears.  Ya, I did use reverb on the lead and BG vocals.  Ya, I know that I do have a penchant for using too much 'verb, as I probably did on this one.  My intent was to use it to put a little bit of an ethereal feeling to the song.  I thought that might match the lyrics.  Oh well, what is it that they say about good intentions?  Thanks for listening and for the feedback.
 
Hi Daryl.  Thanks for the comments and for listening.  I was hoping for a kind of dreamy or ethereal feeling to the song but as Bapu pointed out I may have overdone the reverb.  I'll be bringing the drums up a wee bit.  Thanks again.
 
Hey Wookiee. I appreciate your listening and commenting.  I do tend to overdo reverb, so I appreciate your observation.  Thanks.
 
Hi Mark.  Thanks for your very kind comments buddy.  Moby Grape --- I remember them but haven't listened to them in a long time.  I remember that they had a very straight ahead bass player.  BTW -- I really love the new Blues number that you have posted.  You did indeed capture the Blues.
 
Hey Lynn.  I appreciate your kind comments and I most definitely have gotten the message about the verb. I used my old BOSS Digital Delay DO-5, so I will need to re-record the vocals.  Thanks again.
 
Hi Steve.  I did reach back a bit didn't I.  Thanks very much for listening and commenting.

Freddy
Got me into wanting to head out on an open road to somewhere.
I had trouble understanding the lyrics (but that's mostly an issue with me) I like the mood and viewpoint of the song.

Hi Bats, Bjorn, and Doug.  Thank you very much for listening to this number and for your comments. 
 
Please excuse my delay in responding but I have been working on re-recording the vocal and BGV's.  That has been a task.  After about a dozen takes on the lead vocal I am finally at a stage where I think the vocals are almost acceptable.  I think that I still like the verb on the vocals but I know that I must be wrong because of all the comments that I received.  The world can't be wrong, so I must be.  I certainly will admit that the vocals are clearer, easier to understand, and well, OK, ya they do sound better.
 
Thanks to everyone that responded.  I do appreciate your input.  This kind of excellent input is certainly the value of this forum. 
 
Please let me know if any other improvements might help this song.  Thanks again.
 
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Hey Freddy. I really liked the out there slithery feel of this tune. Easy on the ears. Thanks for all the great tunes out here!

I think it sounds great - vocals nice and clear.  Love the lyrics!