Lynn
Jonathan, I hear nothing but a cool song. It takes a while to build up, but it does get there. Overall, it sounded pretty smooth, so you may be worrying about nothing. I admit that an eleven minute song is hard to concentrate on, so you might consider a bit of judicial editing, but it would be good in the right setting.
Hi Lynn,
Omg, thanks.. I went to sleep last night thinking, "what is wrong with me, I am bothered by 3 transients." Anyways, I became more happy with it, when I listened to it in my car... The bass felt like it was coming up, from the asphalt..
I was really like, "score!"
Anyways, you are totally correct, "11 minutes," designates this song as, "something for a certain moment in time." And hindsight being 20/20, I probably could have done 8 minutes, and left folk, "wanting more," rather than, "needing a rest."
Either way, I am going to have to go back into the project and see what I did there, to get that bass on the asphalt like that. Maybe I will find a way to haircut a part or two..
Well.. Thank you for loaning me your ear, and I'm happy that I was just, "being a hypochondriac," with the transients, that I imagine got smacked via home brew mastering...
Cheers, thanks
Jon