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2017/03/06 16:20:23 (permalink)

I need some critical opinion for this song...

I've been working on this song and I'm not really sure if the arrangement and transitions sound good. I would appreciate any suggestion... Thanks !
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    Re: I need some critical opinion for this song... 2017/03/06 16:36:57 (permalink)
    It's perfect!  what was concerning you?  It's definitely the right length. :D:D

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    Re: I need some critical opinion for this song... 2017/03/06 16:54:26 (permalink)
    Thanks David ! I was thinking maybe is not interesting enough and that should also cut some sounds out and make the transitions more fluid....I don't know :)
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    Re: I need some critical opinion for this song... 2017/03/06 16:57:49 (permalink)
    One thing you might try is sit down and write out about 10 variations of those florid single key runs over the top of the piece.  Then you can get an idea if you've got the best ideas for those.  What I find is, though that usually my first ideas are the best.  It's a good exercise, because it can lead to other things.
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    Re: I need some critical opinion for this song... 2017/03/07 20:50:56 (permalink)
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    Re: I need some critical opinion for this song... 2017/03/10 20:22:39 (permalink)
    Sounds pretty good from here...     The only thing I'd be tempted to do is raise the level of the snare/claps just a wee bit, or instead maybe spread them out just slightly with reverb/delay.   Otherwise I really liked all the synth tones and placement. 

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    Re: I need some critical opinion for this song... 2017/03/11 02:48:07 (permalink)
    Sounded okay to me Chris. Nice synth pop tune

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    Re: I need some critical opinion for this song... 2017/03/12 16:26:17 (permalink)
    Works here and I would think it would work well in a club, mix sounds good here, classic synth pop/dance tune.

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