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drma173
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2013/02/25 19:20:19 (permalink)

I need your opinions fellow producers!!

Hello everyone this is my New collaboration Hip hop track. I made the instrumental and mix. the person rapping/ singing is a fellow friend of mind. https://soundcloud.com/to...g-stutter-dont-kill-my
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    foxwolfen
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/25 23:28:57 (permalink)
    Jay Z would be proud. I could not turn it up too much here, so I cannot say for sure, but judging from the lower volume, I am worried there is not enough punch to drive this when the volume goes up. I will listen again tomorrow and give you a better idea of how it sounds here.

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    drma173
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/26 17:43:55 (permalink)
    did u got to listen to it again?
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/26 18:10:26 (permalink)
    opinions about what in particular ?
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    ohgrant
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/26 19:27:55 (permalink)
    You might want to include a language warning. Not offending to me though. Very nice sounding production. Pumping my sub here. Great choice of vocalist for this. Top notch HH to my ears congrats.

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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/26 19:32:43 (permalink)
    Sounds good to me, possibly almost radio-ready, good stuff. The only thing I would change is perhaps the snare sound, perhaps something punchier and louder in the mix, but that's just me. Not too familiar with the production techniques of the genre to be honest. 

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    foxwolfen
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/26 23:18:05 (permalink)
    I am sorry, I keep forgetting your name. I know you told me but... anyway... as I suspected this needs a bit more energy in the bottom. Its not making my shoelaces bounce. I think it would benefit from a really deep long drawn out "Bum BOOOOOoooooommmm" every now and then. Use it as punctuation. Make it deep. Love the song.

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    foxwolfen
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/26 23:20:14 (permalink)
    Oh, and I do agree, a language warning would be appropriate.

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    drma173
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/27 13:09:45 (permalink)
    thanks it not a finish product yet i still need to make changes
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/28 19:30:55 (permalink)
    add a tuned 808 kick drum to provide some groove on the low end

    it needs to be mastered, and the vocal is great but needs a subtle eq job. It could use a tad of distortion on the verses.

    Best thing I have heard from you yet, DRMA.
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/02/28 23:56:26 (permalink)
    I hate the song. It sounds like all the rest of this style but it's not for me.

    The sound is very good though. It needs more oomph on the kick. the bass needs more bottom as well.

    Other than that, Well done. Edit your title please. A warning would be nice.

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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/03/01 13:22:25 (permalink)
    Tony, your engineering and mixing skills are growing in leaps and bounds.  I believe there's a future for you in music.

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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/03/02 01:47:09 (permalink)
    +1

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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/03/02 02:12:35 (permalink)
    Oh, this is nice (Excluding the swearing... :P) !! I do think the rap vocal has too little stereo width and it seems to be missing something..... But I can't put my finger on it.

     
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    Re:I need your opinions fellow producers!! 2013/03/05 20:55:03 (permalink)
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