"Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you

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2017/03/20 17:00:14 (permalink)

"Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you

Hello everybody
 
A friend of mine and I recorded our first song. It´s german language and the song is about a voyage through space.
 
I hope you guys like it and I would be happy to hear your opinion on this song. Meanwhile, I heard this song so many times, it´s hard for me to have an "objective look" on the song.
 
So, thanks in advance for  your help. :-)
 
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    eph221
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    Re: "Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you 2017/03/20 17:36:10 (permalink)
    this is a great idea and presented well.  I think the melody on the verse should be re-thought to be a little more compelling.  Maybe some dynamics and bigger range for the voice.  It needs to contrast more with the chorus.
     
     

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    Re: "Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you 2017/03/20 22:12:32 (permalink)
    Andy, I really enjoyed this tune.  I don't agree with David about the melody, in fact, that was what drew me into this song.  I think the melody breaks down the language barrier, but I liked the rest of the song, too.  Keep up the good work.

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    Re: "Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you 2017/03/21 04:19:26 (permalink)
    I like listening to songs in different languages, it's like it's a litmus test - is it still a good musical song if you can't understand the words? 
     
    yours is, in my opinion.
     
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    Re: "Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you 2017/03/21 12:06:20 (permalink)
    Hey guys,
     
    wow, I am truly overwhelmed from your feedback. Thank you <3!

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    Re: "Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you 2017/03/22 12:00:37 (permalink)
    Nice work Andy... Can't understand a word, but it didn't detract from the enjoyable uplifting pop/rock vibe you got going here.
     
     
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    Re: "Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you 2017/03/22 18:57:29 (permalink)
    Ditto... can't understand a word, but that didn't matter.   Just an enjoyable straight-forward pop/rock song.

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    Re: "Ich hör´ Dich nicht" - I can´t hear you 2017/03/23 11:28:54 (permalink)
    Again: thank´s everybody for your support. It´s really appreciated <3
     
     

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