I'm Dreaming of You...new mix!

Great groove my ol' pal. Horns sound horny.
Reminded me of Thomas Dolby ( a compliment)
My only mix-crit is the vocal sounds a tad muffled but that's personal taste 

The song itself - holy crap, great songwriting! Love the arrangement and the weird elements, all synced to that awesome rhythm. You are going to get Steely Dan references all day, fun chord changes, dude!
 
 
The mix - you might undo a little vocal processing, are you abusing a microshifter perhaps? Did you double it and get a comb filter? Or did you eq it losing the highs? It has a "tin can" effect. I think I can hear a bit of bgv, maybe two octaves up? Is that adding some filtering somehow? The vocal itself - I think that's great. Very cool performance
 
You might also consider drying up the snare just a tad.
 
What are you using for that little muted trumpet section? Sounds very realistic.
 
This is the kind of song I could listen to about ten times in a row and not get tired. Really great job!
 
-Tom

Wow, what a bass sound and funky groove. I love this tune, and yeah, it sounds like something Donald Fagan might whip up. I agree with the comments about there being something going on with the vocals, but the song is strong enough with such great hooks that I had to listen a second time to hear what Tom is talking about. The rest of the instruments sound great. I'd love to hear more harmonies in there, such great opportunities for them. Love your stuff!

Fantastic musically and production-wise.  I'm particularly impressed by the lyric set-up to the chorus -- the verses are well thought out and well-written.  The chorus had me a little confused as it seems that the directness of the verse lyric was lost.  To me, it seems that the chorus lyrics need something that connect her with scariness or danger -- or, maybe the way you have it is fine in that the listener makes the connection.  Just some thoughts...  Very good job and a very good listen.  !!
 
Allan
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Killer Diller Drum Mix myolpal.
 
Love the vocals.
 

Just had a listen...   Sounds good here.    Did you change the vocal in the mix?   I do hear some effect but as it is I liked it.    Oh, and yeah, it sounds like a Steely Dan influence is all over those changes + melody.   Not easy to pull off this well IMO, but Ol Pal can do it.   
 

Very nice, great intelligent lyrics and groovy.
The hi-hat is maybe i a tad hissy, in my ears.
Very nice, you are very musical.

yorolpal
Another new ditty up on my soundcloud thingy.
 
Dreaming of You
 
Sleep tight...don't let the bedbugs bite.
 

 

Hi Yoropol, 
Great song, loved the groove. I think the changes you made worked well it all sounds good to my ears. Listening to your new song now "Nobody breaks My Heart" just as good if not better, you got something going on. I enjoy your work.