Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary)

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2005/08/02 11:43:09 (permalink)

Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary)

So, after hours and hours of listening and trying to figure this out, here it is. Inside Black Thirteen. A horror style themish song based on Stephen King's Dark Tower V - Wolves of the Calla. Comment/flames always welcome and appreciated.

Inside Black Thirteen
4.3 MB Mp3 Running Time - 3:41

post edited by Fisher - 2005/08/02 20:39:49

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    Fisher
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    RE: Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary) 2005/08/03 23:43:05 (permalink)
    Bumpity...

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    RE: Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary) 2005/08/04 06:22:55 (permalink)
    This sounds like you are interacting with visual images. I wish this was in a film.

    I don't have much technical advice to offer. I listened through headphones only, and it sounded pretty good to me. Sorry this isn't more helpful.
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    Fisher
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    RE: Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary) 2005/08/04 13:05:11 (permalink)

    ORIGINAL: joe b

    This sounds like you are interacting with visual images. I wish this was in a film.


    Yeah, I've always tried to write stuff that gets in your head and forces (or re-inforces, if you will) some type of imagery. Unfortunately, I have no idea how to get into the movie biz (musically), but I would absolutely love to do so. Anyhow, thanks for the listen.

    -Fish

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    Fisher
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    RE: Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary) 2005/08/08 17:08:46 (permalink)
    52 views, one comment...I didn't mean to scare you all that much!

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    RE: Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary) 2005/08/08 20:44:18 (permalink)
    I'd love to offer you some usable critique here, but as far as listening enjoyment......Without a visual, it's just not a good listen.
    Don't take me wrong, I'm not knocking your talent, or work, it's just not listening music.
    Not for me anyway.
    I'd love to know what imagery goes with, so I could give you a good review, but without that, it's difficult to say one way or the other.
    Sorry that's not much help, I just thought that could be why there aren't more responses.

    Stephen

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    RE: Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary) 2005/08/09 01:55:53 (permalink)
    I like the ambient feel in the intro. I didn't find the track overly frightening.

    I find it difficult to comment on a track like this. If it's intended to be a soundtrack, it's hard to evalutate it without seeing what it goes with. At times, it seems some of the slow attack, bell-like sound might be a bit louder than the other parts, but maybe that's the desired effect.

    Interesting work!

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    RE: Inside Black Thirteen (ooo scary) 2005/08/14 15:02:17 (permalink)
    Hahaha. I Love synth intro. Did you create those sounds or use someone elses? Which synth did you use?

    The organ is not a very good sample/synth. It lacks some depth, maybe how you mixed it.
    The locusts flying around were really annoying and really too loud.

    I like the kick, bassy and dreamy.

    I stopped listening after about 1:30 minutes. Got bored.
    Need some work on keeping it musically interesting rather than just a soundscape of sounds.

    Cheers

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